IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 83

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. Others think that watching TV or playing computer games can do children good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a widely-held perception that the acquisition of knowledge by way of book's exploration works wonders for children. By contrast, others outweigh the role of entertainment platforms such as watching television or playing games, as those mentioned help developing imagination and intelligence in the youth. In this essay, I will discuss both conceptions and give some justifications why the role of the former in boosting intelligence and language ability is equal to the latter.

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Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The social fabric of a society is built with the right blend of both the old and younger generations. Many cultures seem to prefer the young blood, however, many others, credit the older generations with a higher value. While both factions have positive and negative aspects, in my opinion, it is the youth that are incidental to any nation's true value.

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Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People tend to think differently on a single issue as some suggest, that the government should emphasize more on the railways than on roads while others possess the opposite mindset. In my opinion, more importance should be rendered towards railway as it saves time as well as lives.

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Some peole think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think that government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

People have many different opinions about how the national authorities should measure their countries’ progress. While I agree with the idea that economic progress is seen as a fundamental goal for governments, I support the other idea that social services like medical care and schooling programs are just as important.

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some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. do you agree or disagree

It is irrefutable that the uplifting of underprivileged people is one of the most important issues facing us today and, the people reckon that this section of society should be taken more care than the other parts of the society.The following essay takes a look at the positive side of the argument. Firstly, I will explore how this helps to scale up the life of people and secondly, I will discuss how this will impact the country as whole.

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In many countries, traditional food is replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effect families, individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree

It is true that nowadays, fast foods have taken the place of local cuisines in many countries which have negative impacts on families, citizens and societies. I agree with this statement and will discuss why in the essay.

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some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people . Do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that the unemployment is one of the most important issues facing us today and, people reckon that the underprivileged community should be taken more care than the upper part of society. The following essay takes a look at the positive side of the argument. Firstly, I will explore how this helps to scale up the life of people and secondly, I will discuss how this will impact the country as whole.

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Essay#4: Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Following with the rapid development of technology, artistic works and historical remnants can now be viewed online. Accordingly, it is argued that if there is room for public museums and art galleries in the present. In my opinion, memorial houses and art galleries are irreplaceable.

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Some people think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think the government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

It is argued that the administration should invest mainly in its economy. Although I agree with this point of view, I disagree that the nation should spend less money on community services including health and training plans.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is necessary to be together during the pandemic situations so that the entire world can be safe again. If often recommended that the developed countries must help the third world war nations during any calamities so that the human life is saved. That’s how the other provinces can stand again to restart their life. I agree with the notion and will explain further why they should help others.

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Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Economic inequality has become increasingly popular among demographics of the society. Few people claim that the gap between the wealthiest and the poorest income brackets should be reduced. I completely agree with this statement; if that happens then there will be the development of the country.

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Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer

It is argued that to protect domestic businesses, countries should limit the number of multinational companies. However, I completely disagree with this point of view.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large faction of the society undeniably views a higher remuneration to be the vital element when selecting a job. However, many argue that job satisfaction should be the most significant determinant to choose a career path. I strongly agree with the latter viewpoint and will explain in detail the reasons why a higher pay package should not influence decision-making.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Telling young kids that if they work hard they can accomplish anything is pretty common in certain parts of the world. There are several benefits and drawbacks of this message sent to children. On the one side, this can empower the young kid, however, it can bring up some mental health problems, which can be carried to their adult life.

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of society believes that the FM channels are the constructive source to present current affairs. However, others argue that TV is far better to form to obtain the info. In my opinion, both are good in a way, but radio suffices the need for getting the news since it is portable.

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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion?

There is no doubt that live sports coverage on television is very popular nowadays in a number of countries. There are many people who think that this might be the reason why the youngsters do not participate in outdoor games themselves, however, I completely disagree.

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“Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication”. Do you agree or disagree?

The biggest characteristic that differentiates humans from the other species on the globe, is the ability to express their thoughts. In the viewpoint of some people, spoken communication is mightier than, written, while others are of diverse opinion. I however, believe that both modes of expression are prominent, depending upon the circumstances.

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Nowadays, people believe that the environment influences their accomplishments. Some people think their success and accomplishment were influenced by the places where they grew up. Do you think the environment does or does not affect people’s accomplishment and how it affects? Please give an example of a famous person to support your statement.

These days, there is an ongoing debate among people that success depends on the environment. Whereas some are in the favour that places place an indispensable role in order to get success, while I do not advocate this given notion and this essay will discuss the reason behind my view point.

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Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Eating carbohydrate in an amount more than necessary is not healthy. According to a few individuals, the state should take care of this matter.While, the rest think that people should take control of their own sugar consumption. In my opinion, I believe that everyone should keep a track of their carbohydrate intake. However, this essay will discuss both views.

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"Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We can see, undoubtedly, prophylaxis of diseases are considered more than having medication. Since, the medicine causes internal side effects. Therefore, I strongly recommend to prefer sickness preventive steps along with medical studies over funding other health. Addiction of drugs must be discouraged.

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