IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 81

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Nowadays, people believe that the environment influences their accomplishments. Some people think their success and accomplishment were influenced by the places where they grew up. Do you think the environment does or does not affect people’s accomplishment and how it affects? Please give an example of a famous person to support your statement.

These days, there is an ongoing debate among people that success depends on the environment. Whereas some are in the favour that places place an indispensable role in order to get success, while I do not advocate this given notion and this essay will discuss the reason behind my view point.

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Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Eating carbohydrate in an amount more than necessary is not healthy. According to a few individuals, the state should take care of this matter.While, the rest think that people should take control of their own sugar consumption. In my opinion, I believe that everyone should keep a track of their carbohydrate intake. However, this essay will discuss both views.

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"Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We can see, undoubtedly, prophylaxis of diseases are considered more than having medication. Since, the medicine causes internal side effects. Therefore, I strongly recommend to prefer sickness preventive steps along with medical studies over funding other health. Addiction of drugs must be discouraged.

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"Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We can see, undoubtedly, prophylaxis of diseases are considered more than having medication. Since, the medicine causes internal side effects. Therefore, I strongly recommend to prefer preventive steps along with medical studies to be given priority over enhancing health units and attracting the patients. Addiction of drugs must be discouraged.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Sports events have started to be used as a means of advertising several companies and their products. Although some worry about the negative effects that the commercial use of sports may have on the activities, I believe that it is an effective way for business owners to gain public interest and for players to improve their performance.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Citizens have contrasting views, whether children should send to combine or single-sex academy. In my opinion, they can have more effective learning from the co-educational environment; however, this essay will discuss both views.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Citizens have contrasting views, whether children should send to combine or single-sex academy. In my opinion, they can have more effective learning from co-educational environment; however, this essay will discuss both views.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Today, people will consume more fountain drinks and sugary beverages than ever before, which has increased obesity and related health problems among the population of the nations around the world. This essay will discuss the major causes of the trend and suggest possible solutions.

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Some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes, others think they should live with their family members. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people insist that aged people should live in aged cares whereas others deem they should reside with their family members. I personally believe that old people certainly should live in an aged care as they have experienced and specialized staffs that can efficiently take care of them.

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Some people think that when recruiting companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Opinions on who is the most successful candidate for a job are often divided. Although team players are better, it is my firm belief that employment of those who are inventive and can deal with tasks by themselves is more sensible when hiring workers.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's youth is a colossal upsurge in online shopping. This emerging growth may negatively impact the local shops in the countryside and cities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above view because online shopping has several advantages to consumers.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's youth is a colossal upsurge in online shopping. This emerging growth may negatively affect the local shops in the countrysides and cities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above view because online shopping has several advantages to consumers.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The authorities consider the financial sector as a vital aim in a state’s growth. For certain public, similar concentration is believed to be given to all the sectors. Since, economy represent strength of a country. In my opinion, I believe that economic development leads to bear all the challenges.

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Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.

These days people are not following a proper diet plan and their pattern of food intake is erratic. There are multiple reasons for this, budget constraints and busy lifestyle being the most important. This can be mended by taking the meals at a proper time and avoiding junk foods.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. what are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

People nowadays, love to live an extravagant lifestyle, though they aren't capable of doing such thing. Eventually, they get into financial risks of paying high debts. In this essay, we will briefly go through about relevant attributes, and take some preventive measures.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do you agree or disagree with this development?

In modern days, some people say that untouched areas such as the South Pole are feasible for environmental activists’ travelling. I believe that although this matter does have several drawbacks, the benefits dwarf them.

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The popularity of news media often has been significantly influential in people's lives. Some people believe this to be a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion?

There is no doubt that the television is the most watched and influencing news' medium. With its increasing recognition, the impact it has on people is also rising. Although there are some benefits, I believe its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While many citizens are with the view that there should be more entertainment areas in the society, some individuals think that these spaces could be better be used to employ important issues like sheltering. In my opinion, there should be sufficient number of open gardens to maintain a healthy life; nevertheless, other significant aspects can be solved in other ways.

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Nowadays,the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The scientific breakthrough has significant impact on the ways people communicate with each other. At present era, people are more prone to maintain virtual contacts than real. It is a positive development, because it has made the process of communication more comfortable.

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Some people claim that many things that children are taught at school are a waste of time. Other people argue that everything that children study at school is useful at sometime. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

What should and should be not a part of school curriculum, has always been a debatable issue. In the viewpoint of some people, certain subjects like history and art taught to the students, have no practical use in real life and hence should not be included as a part of the education, while others are of diverse opinion. I, believe that every course learnt at a younger stage, adds value to the kid's life in one way or the other. This essay will analyse both the views as well as provide a logical conclusion.

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