Samples Band 9

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that internet is shrinking our world with its tremendous benefits. Others argue that it has major adverse consequences for the course of human civilization due to its negative effects on family relationship. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Technology is flourishing by its leaps and bounds in each and every field and internet plays a prominent role in the human generation. However, it has been argued that the internet is having more disadvantages in people life than the advantages. This essay will elicit upon both the elements then only I will give my own view.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While a number of individuals opine that imprisonment for long periods is the prime way of decreasing offences, others think vibrant actions will be more appropriate to do so. In my opinion, the rate of violence could be dropped by imposing proper laws and legislations considering some aspects instead of just imposing longer sentences; however, both views will be discussed.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by the majority, that embracing of unfortunate times in life, like financial instability or unpleasant job, is the best they can do, while other think that an individual has to put efforts, in order to improve unsatisfactory circumstances. In my opinion, whatsoever is the case, a soul should never quit trying under any condition, as prolonged efforts give a ray of hope for prosperity.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or storage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by the majority, that embracing of unfortunate times in life, like financial instability or unpleasant job, is the best they can do, while other think that an individual need to put efforts in order to improve unsatisfactory circumstances. In my opinion, a soul should never quit trying under any condition, as prolonged efforts give a ray of hope for prosperity.

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Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When talking about refurbishings and renovations, many people are of the opinion that structures that have been up a really long time should be destroyed and a new one built in its stead. I strongly concur with this reasoning and in this essay, I will discuss why.

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Throughout history, male leaders have led us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

According to past experience, it has been noticed that women lead the states more peacefully compared to men leaders. I disagree with the statement because leadership does not depend on gender.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Over a decade, the usage of fossil resource as a major of fuel in machinery things, especially vehicles, becomes a major of debate. The reason behind this controversy is because of the impact that it inflicts in the increasing number of traffic together with the pollution produces by them. Regarding that matter, many people think that increasing the petrol price will solve those problems, but in my opinion, I do not think it works. Therefore, in this essay, I would like to explain my belief and the effective ways to encounter those issues as well as providing a plausible conclusion.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

Nowadays, most of the students are more on practical and they thought ahead before getting stress and pressure when they enter university life. Some went to other places and explore, others find a job for experience in a certain year. I would agree with this notion, and it will give advantages of the person before jumping into a new chapter.

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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that in order to play any sport successfully some requirements are needed. While some people believe that physical strength is the most important factor, others argue that mental strength should be on the top of the list. In this essay, I will discuss both arguments and I will support with examples why I agree with both views.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief nowadays that fast-developing technology leads to the extinction of the authentic lifestyle, furthermore, it is commonly accepted that there is no point in keeping the traditions alive. In this essay, I will look into this opinion and will provide the reasons why I completely disagree with the statement.

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Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree?

The growing number of individuals think that the industries and citizens both are required to be paid for cleaning the environment. I agree with the given statement, and the reasons behind my thought will be discussed in the essay.

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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalization has brought in all countries across the world on to the same thread, which ought to have sound knowledge in different types of foreign languages. This mandates the equal importance of all types of skills like listening, reading, speaking and writing while learning destination countries medium of communication. I completely agree with the above statement and provide my supporting examples in this essay.

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Computer games is very popular in all ages and nations. Parent think it has little educational Value and more harmful effects. What is your opinion about this? Give example based on your own experience.

With the advance of technology computer games' popularity started to skyrocket. However, some controversy remains regarding this matter. Parents might argue that negative side-effects may derive from playing and that it is just a waste of time. As a gamer myself I will present a strong contrary point, explaining why they help us to develop important skills and strengthen our social relationships.

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Prision is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to give people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, prison is seen to be the most common way to prevent a large number of crimes. However, it is believed by a certain part of a population that education might be the best solution to this problem. I agree with a presented claim since there are a lot of reasons why imprisonment is not an efficient way to solve this issue.

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Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. Do you agree or disagree?

It is forecasted that a nation will make more progress if the state authorities allocate a vast amount of their budget on the technical subjects instead of others. I partially agree with the statement as an allotment in other courses are needed to maintain balance in the society.

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Some people say that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, there is a controversy about phones and their ban in public places, such as libraries, different means of transport and shops. I agree with the fact that technologies should be prohibited in these places since it might cause inconvenience for other people.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Many consider that it could be an amazing idea to study parenting to adolescent at academics. I disagree with this notion and I will discuss it in the following paragraphs along with skills needed to be a good parent.

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Schools should do more to teach students about their health and well being. Do you agree or disagree?

Primary educational institutions should educate students more about their healthfulness. I strongly agree with this idea. It is crucial to have a sound knowledge about our physical and mental well-being in the contemporary era. Besides, the essay will further articulate the vital benefits of learning; physical and mental aptitude.

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Some people believe that having too many TV channels is good for people, while some other pole believe that it only brings some poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that there are interesting purposes on the broadcast TV for individuals these days, meanwhile; others suppose that it is just the low-quality channels. This essay will discuss two viewpoints and I totally agree with the first one in the following paragraphs.

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Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, tech) .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the basic needs of humans, i.e., clothes have now become a way to flaunt high status in society. Also, the development in science, which is mainly essential to ease and support various tasks, is now the symbol of high class for teenagers. I completely agree that our youth is wasting unnecessary time and money to buy expensive clothes and electronic equipment.

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