Samples Band 9

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 9

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In some area of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In today’s generation, there has been a controversy among the people regarding teenagers roaming around on the roads at night. Recently, in the US, children are barred to go out alone in the night and are asked to compulsorily take an adult in case they wish to be outdoors. In my opinion, I completely agree with the decision taken by the authorities as it is dangerous for them.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Technology is widely used in education. Opinions are divided with regards to whether computers being utilized is a beneficial improvement or a problem. In order to give my opinion, it is important to consider both sides of this debate.

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2) In the future, more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree?

Exploring unknown places in a distant land is a dream of most of the people.It is believed that in future domestic places will be visited more by local people rather than visiting places in foreign countries.Personally, I completely disagree with this statement because the curiosity of seeing a different place in a foreign land is undeniable and the improved economical status of individuals all across the world.

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

A creative mind is a blessing for society and learning art will enhance a student’s overall performance. because of its benefits, intellects emphasize that it should be made mandatory in schools. I agree with the notion and basic level of the craft must be taught in schools because it improves child mental level and broadens their thinking horizon. In this essay, the importance of teaching arts in schools will be discussed.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art was considered an integral part of communities and valued for centuries. However, with the change of time values change, the art does not attract the human’s eye anymore. Instead, people started to consider science, technology and business sectors to be more influential . In my opinion science and technology comforted human life and business gave financial stability. In order to revive art’s popularity craft festivals must be celebrated. In this essay, the causes of the decline in art’s popularity and way to gain people attention will be discussed.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Survival of the non-native overseas without the knowledge of the local language creates a barrier in connecting with folks and in performing day to day activities. I completely agree to the statement cited above and this essay will discuss the issues faced by the individual residing in abroad without the command over the native speech.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Children need to be physically active and fit to ensure that their biological growth is normal at all times and the onus of this should lie with their parents and not with schools. These educational institutions should not waste valuable time having sports lessons as a part of the curriculum. I completely disagree with this idea and this essay will provide reasons and explanations for the same.

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some people think that the government i s wasting money on arts and that this money could better be spent elsewhere. To what extents do you agree with this view?

There is no doubt that government spend a large part of its money on arts. While some people consider it is a destruction of taxpayers money and it could be spent on other things. However, I totally contradict with the former argument which I will discuss in the latter view with suitable example.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lack of food availability is raising a significant concern in this temporary world, and there is a biology-related solution that scientists suggest is genetically modified foods. In my perspective, utilizing this biology technique will solve the shortage of foods because it eliminates some of the potential causes of this issue.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.

Nowadays, due to the growth of the populace, people are facing a lot of problems like illiteracy, pollution, lack of resources and many others. Whereas, there are few reasons behind this tremendous growth. This essay will support my stand on why it is the world's biggest issue with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this current day and age, games have been considered a major sports activity. Additionally, countries around the globe have seen a significant rise in the popularity of these playing stations. While some believe this has little to no educational value for children and others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, controlled amounts of playing should not be discouraged.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

The question of whether people should be educated about the past is quite controversial. Both sides and the reasons why I totally disagree with the given statement will be discussed in this essay.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The question of whether people are judged by their characteristics or according to their social prestige is a quite debatable topic today. It is considered by some that people are mostly judged by their wealth and social position, not by their core values. Both sides will be examined and I will discuss why I disagree with the given statement.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society

The tourism industry is continuously experiencing growth which I believe is very advantageous to people and community. These merits will be discussed in the essay below.

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Some people think that it s necessary to involve the whole family into nurturing and upbringing a child, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether a whole family is needed to raise a child is a topical issue today. It is considered by some that children ought to be brought up in a multigenerational family, while others argue that a two-parent family might be more beneficial. Both sides of the argument will be examined and I will discuss them now.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Numerous nations are becoming successful at the international platform by providing training to their best athletes instead of working on improving facilities for everybody. I am of the opinion that it has many drawbacks and it will be justified in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your Opinion?

In this current day and age, science has improved the way we work and pursue different tasks. computerization has advanced in the last decade to make certain tasks easy as well as efficient. While some people do believe that eventually all jobs will be performed by robots and others believe the right time has not arrived yet. In my opinion, jobs which put human life in danger should help of automation.

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Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

In recent years, the degradation of many world's economics has seen a long-term increasing tendency. There is an opinion that governments should shift their emphasis on their development and not invest their efforts and financial resources to help others. I completely disagree with this statement and the following essay will prove my point of view.

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There are many extinct animals’ species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A lot of species have extinct in recent years. It is been argued by some people that time should be dedicated towards their protection others oppose and state that time should be given to address the human-related issues. Animals should be protected as they are a part of our ecosystem while the welfare of humans should be kept in mind. I strongly believe that issues of both animals and humans can be solved simultaneously. In this essay, why to address the problems of animals and humans will be discussed.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don’t really need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

There is no doubt that advertising plays a prominent role in today's world. We see adverts on television, online, SMS and streets. While some people believe it provokes them to buy more, others argue that it is a better approach to market the customers. I would agree with the former opinion.

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