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write a letter to your friend . you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged 1. apologizing for damaging the product 2. explain what happened 3. say how you are going to fix that issue

It's taken me so long to tell you that why didn't I gave your car back that i borrowed from you last week.
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**You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.** **Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:** - **apologise for the damage to the item** - **explain what happened** - **say how you are going

I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I'm writing this letter in order to express my apology for the damage which is caused due to my negligence. As you are aware that I borrowed a laptop from you
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. a) apologize for damaging the product b) explain what happened c) say how are you going to fix the issue

How are you? I hope this letter finds you in your good health and spirit. I'm writing this letter to express my apologize for the laptop that I had lend it from you last week had been broken.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize for accidentally breaking your speaker. I felt extremely disappointed with myself when I saw it broken into pieces.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. - apologize for damaging the product / stuff - explain what happened - say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to say I am sorry for accidentally breaking your favourite earrings, which I had taken from you for my brother's marriage.
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I You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

Hello! How are you . Hope you're in radiant of health. I'm writing this letter to apologize for the borrowed laptop of yours, which has been damaged since last week.
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*You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.** **Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:** - **apologise for the damage to the item** - **explain what happened** - **say how you are going t

I'm writing to you to apologize about your book that you've borrowed me recently.
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You have borrowed something from a friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Apologize for the damage. - Explain what happened. - Suggest how to resolve the issue.

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to you to express my apology for the item that I broke last Saturday; moving further, this item is your favourite flower vase, which is very expensive and you purchased
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: apologise for the damage to the item explain what happened say how you are going to fix the issue

Hope you're well! I am sending you this letter with an apology for damaging your book.
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Write a letter to a friend.You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1.Apology for damaging the product. 2.Explain what happened. 3.Say how you are going to fix the issue.

I’m sorry it has taken me a long time to write to you about the laptop I borrowed last month.
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Write a letter to a friend.You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1.Apology for damaging the product. 2.Explain what happened. 3.Say how you are going to fix the issue.

I hope you’re well, I just wanted to write a few words about the laptop which I borrowed last week.
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Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologise for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how you are going to fix the issue

Hope you're okay. I'm writing to let you know that the DIY book you lent me last month got damaged accidentally.
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Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologise for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how you are going to fix the issue

Sorry, it's taken me so long to write to you but at last, I put pen to paper to explain why I haven't returned the book I brorrowed from you.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope this letter finds you in good health and prosperity .I am writing to apologize for damaging the iPad that I took from you .
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. -apologize for damaging the product / stuff -explain what happened -say how are you going to fix the issue

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to offer my apology for damaging your wrist watch, which I borrowed from you last week.
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You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: Apologize for the damage to the item Explain what happened Say how you are going to fix the issue

I borrowed a bracelet from you recently. I know you bought that bracelet with great pleasure.
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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. -Apologize for damaging the product. -Explain what happened. -Say how are you going to fix the issue.

I hope you are good. I am writing to you to tell you about static calaculator that I lended from you last week.
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Write a letter to a friend.You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1.Apology for damaging the product. 2.Explain what happened. 3.Say how you are going to fix the issue.

Sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at last I put my pen and paper to explain why I haven't returned that Anatomy book I borrowed from you.
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**You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.** **Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:** - **apologise for the damage to the item** - **explain what happened** - **say how you ar

It,s been such a long time since we last met . How have you been ? I hope you are doing well . I,m writing this letter to apologise for the damage of the hard drive that I borrowed from you last month.
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You have borrowed something from a friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Apologize for the damage. - Explain what happened. - Suggest how to resolve the issue

I hope you are well. I am writing to apologize for the laptop that I borrowed from you, as unfortunately it is broken.
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