Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that top

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seats in companies are taken by men, even though more than a half of employees are women in developed nations and employers should distribute top

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positions among female workers.

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essay totally agrees with

latter point

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the latter point

because opportunity of promotion can boost female productivity and efficiency to a decent level and

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because of

enomorous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

numerous

quantity of fresh ideas that can be brought by business women. The primary reason why a half of high-level seats should be diversified among both sexes is because of benefits that can have an employer caused by a competition among female part of a company.

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The possibility

of

promotion

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promoting

motivates women to work harder and effectively to be

honored

having an illustrious reputation; respected

honoured

as an outstanding employee and in a result promoted to a

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, the Economist recently published an article about experiment made by Google company, which gave than a half of their top

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positions to women and

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their annual revenue was doubled because of rising of motivation and productivity. The

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main reason why we should see much more female faces at head positions is that they can bring a fresh blood and ideas in conservative structures of men-built companies.

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can bring

unseen boost

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an unseen boost

of profits for each sector of economics, even for sectors

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under normal conditions

commonly

dominated by men.

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, Fiat recently hired a

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woman

for the head

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of sales position and an annual report showed an extraordinary rise of income because of marketing strategy brought by a new

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. In conclusion, it is often argued that more high-level positions should be filled with females because most seats at

management

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took by men, even though more than 50 per cent of employees are women.

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essay totally agrees with

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statement because of

benefits

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the benefits

of productivity and efficiency rising and because of

plentiness

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of fresh ideas that can bring female

manager

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