You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen, but it did not work. You phoned the shop, but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter: • Explain how you feel about their lack of response • Say what you think of their employees • Give your opinion on their quality of service Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to express my displeasure with regards to the service provided by the store. I purchased a food processor
last
week, and as I was very excited to try it I went home unboxed the item and plugged it in. Unfortunately
it did not work so I read the manual and it said to call the store for Add a comma
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such
problems. Even though I have made multiple phone calls throughout the week, no-one
has reverted back and Correct your spelling
no one
that is
very disheartening considering the reputation of your store.
Let me explain, when I made my first
call to Add an article
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Furthermore
when I called again I was put on hold for over ten minutes before being disconnected with any intimidation. Add a comma
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I think your works are either under qualified
for the job and simply not interested in doing work.
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such
low standards of service is appalling and you would lose a lot of valuable buyers unless there is an improvement.
Your's Sincerely
EktaSubmitted by ektarohra30 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite