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You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. Your email should do the following things: State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

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Dear
Restaurant
 Manager, Yesterday evening my wife, teenage son and I dinned at the Southern Sun
Restaurant
 to celebrate my son's high school graduation. We have in the past visited the Southern Sun
Restaurant
 numerous times and enjoyed the best of exquisite dishes, but our experience yesterday was pathetic and there was no manager of the site to relay
this
 grievance to.
Hence
 I will crave your indulgence to utilize the medium to express my experience.
Firstly
, the food we ordered was undercooked and flavourless. The coconut rice delicacy my wife was served was hard and the spaghetti nodules my son ordered lacked seasoning.
hence
 was difficult for them to consume the dish. More so, the service was
also
 not in the best of condition as we has to wait 30 minutes to get the menus and wait another 1 hour to get served.
hence
 the appetizer and the entrée arrived at the same time. Having visited the
restaurant
 on different occasions and had a magnificent experience, I will seek your kind permission to request a refund of £200 paid as the bill in full.
Also
, if you require
further
 information please feel free to contact me at 5556-678-901 Regards, Olayonu Oluwatimillehin
Submitted by olayonuoluwatimilehin on

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