The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart shows the proportion of
men
and women
who consumed five or more portion
of fruit and Fix the agreement mistake
portions
vegetables
per day
by age group in the UK in 2006. It is evident that the percentages of both
males and females eating fruits
and vegetables
were upward trends
. Fix the agreement mistake
trend
In addition
, the figure for women
eating fruits
and vegetables
mostly was higher than that for men
.
Looking at the bar chart, the proportion of females who consumed five or more portions of fruits
and vegetables
per day
at the age from
19 to 24 was higher than that of males, at 16% and 15% respectively. Between 25 and 44 years old, Change preposition
of
both
proportions of women
and men
who ate fruits
and vegetables
increased significantly. Until they were in
the age of 45-54, the figure for Change preposition
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men
remained at 20% while
that for women
rose steadily to over 25%
When women
and men
were 55-64 years old, the figure for consuming fruit and vegetables
reached the peak, at nearly 35% and over 30% correspondingly. There was an
sharp decrease in percentages of Change the article
a
both
men
and women
who eat fruits
and vegetables
per day
. On being 75 years old, the proportion of both
men
and women
eating fruits
and vegetables
per day
went up at the same level, at 25%Submitted by ahmadzm2004 on
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