The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world organization made a bar chart by

age

with percentage count for how many women & men eat

fruits

and

vegetabels

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vegetables

dring

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during

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the day in the UK

2006

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in 2006

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, They

recommends

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recommend

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that people should eat five or more portions of

both

fruit and

vegetabels

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vegetables

. The paragraph shows that people from the

age

55-64 from

both

genders consume

fruits

and vegetables the most, After that the

age

65-74 where in

both

case's

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women are the one's who

absorbing

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absorb

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fruits

and

vegetabels

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vegetables

the most and

getting

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get

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the biggest benefit. Yet it

didnt

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didn't

pass

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passes

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the 30% from the

age

19-54. The younger people should

also

consume

both

fruits

and vegetables so they can grow

stroung

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strong

and healthy. In

conclusion

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the

age

55-64 is the only

age

that went above

the

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apply

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30% where the rest of the

age

group was under

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apply

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30%, the ages 19-24

didnt

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didn't

even pass

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apply

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20

percent

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per cent

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the bar chart shows that women

in general

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, in general,

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consume

fruits

and vegetables more

then

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men.