The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The given bar chart presents the proportion of males and
females
in the UK consuming portions of fruits and vegetables per day by age group in 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that women consumed the
total of portions of fruits and vegetables more than men.
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According to
the data, the figure of women, who were 19-64 years old, steadily increased as the age group increased. However
, younger females
tended to have portions of the food groups lower than old ones. The females
of ages
55-64 had the highest consumption of fruits and vegetables at nearly 35%, while
the lowest belonged to the females
of ages
19-24, around 15%.
On the other hand
, There was fluctuated
in Replace the word
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percentage
of age groups of men. Men of Add an article
the percentage
ages
55-64 consumed the highest at around 30-35%, as
the same figure as women. Interestingly, the proportion of both genders of Change preposition
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ages
75 were
nearly, at around 25%.Change the verb form
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