Your recently visited a store and didn't like the customer service there. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say -What was the issue there? -Why wasn't the staff helpful? -Suggest what can be done about it

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To Whom It May Concern, My name is Sampurna, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I had a bad experience when I bought my daily things in your shop one week ago. I was disappointed there because of your rude clerk named

Jono

. I am a new buyer in your place. I was asking for a new brand of instant

noodle

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called Indomie to him. I realize that you have

this

brand because your shop was famous and one of the big kiosks in our city, Bandung. But, I was angry with your staff because they even did not reply to my question and ignored me as a customer. So I just search for it by myself and the worst thing ever was when

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could not find my lovely instant noodle. and after it, I went to my house with a bad impression. In conclusion, I think you have to consider replacing

Jono

with another person who has a better attitude, or you should give

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proper training for him before you extend

Jono

's contract.

Last

but not least if

Jono

does not have a good report you can fire him. Best Regards Sampurna

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7 paragraphs

198 words

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Suitable writing tone

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Your recently visited a store and didn't like the customer service there. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say -What was the issue there? -Why wasn't the staff helpful? -Suggest what can be done about it

The Greeting

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons and include examples.

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?