Question: Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to you regarding my online purchase. I would request you to refund the amount that I spent on fairy lights. As per the description, the length is accurate and it works absolutely fine. The main problem is in the plug. Lights are cell-based. It will need to put three recharged batteries to start.
Whereas
, I ordered electronic light bulbs which will work on a USB port.
Hence
, the detail portion
as well as
the pictures that are uploaded online explains fairy lights on the USB ports.
Moreover
, I already paid a good money for
this
service. But I did not get what I expected.
Instead
of it replacing, I want my money back. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet Kaur.
Submitted by harpreet291kaur on

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refund
  • defective
  • malfunction
  • compensation
  • disappointed
  • unsatisfactory
  • order number
  • purchase date
  • troubleshooting
  • receipt
  • customer service
  • promptly
  • resolution
  • process
  • policy
  • replacement
  • repair
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