You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to book a double bedroom suite

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weekend. I have been highly recommended of your hotel by my friend who stayed earlier. And, I am planning to visit Manama with my family

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weekend and looking for a budget and family-friendly hotel to stay. I will be reaching Manama on 23rd August 2023 and will be departing on 25th. During

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period I prefer a double bedroom suite that can accommodate 4 persons ( 2 Adults and 2 Kids) facing the seafront. I

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need one set of extra beds. Please do quote the best price that you can offer for the same. In case, if

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room is not available please quote an alternative with similar features. I need your suggestion on the kids-related activities around the hotel, preferably within walking or cycling distances.

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, give me some recommendations of any important natural/heritages that we can visit. Thank you, Looking forward to your response and best-priced quotation. Warm regards, Manoj Mohandoss

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

172 words

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