The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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british
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British
students
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university
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who were
were
able to speak different languages from 2000 to 2010.
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Overall
, students
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skill
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skills
english
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other languages
while
reduced interest in frensh
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In 2000, there were 20 Correct your spelling
french
fresh
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per cent
students
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studying
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in 2010. Change the spelling
per cent
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the sapnish
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which
at
35 from 30. Change preposition
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, 5% more students
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to
studing
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studying
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in 2010 compared to 2000 respectively 15 to 20.
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the german
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German
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, both were quite stuck at 10% without changes. Furthermore
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the french
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