The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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Pie
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The pie
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chart
show
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shows
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ratio
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the ratio
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of
british
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British
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students
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at one
untiversity
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university
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who were
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were
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was
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able to speak different languages from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
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,
students
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have improved their
language
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skill
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skills
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from only speaking to
english
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English
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. Pupils have
shows
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shown
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interest study in
spanish
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Spanish
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and
another languages
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another language
other languages
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while
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reduced interest in
frensh
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french
fresh
. In 2000, there were 20
percent
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per cent
show examples
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students
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of students
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were not
studing
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studying
other
lanugage
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languages
that has
been
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apply
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improved st 10
percent
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per cent
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in 2010.
Same
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The same
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reverse improvement has
found
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been found
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in
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the sapnish
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sapnish
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Spanish
language
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that
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which
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reached
at
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apply
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35 from 30.
On the other hand
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, 5% more
students
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has
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have
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contributed
in
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to
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studing
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studying
one another
laguage
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language
in 2010 compared to 2000 respectively 15 to 20. There is no
differance
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difference
found in
studing
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studying
two other
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language
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languages
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and
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the german
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german
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German
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language
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, both were quite stuck at 10% without changes.
Furthermore
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,
student
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the student
a student
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has
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apply
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show
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shown
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less interest in
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the french
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french
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French
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language
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as it
droped
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dropped
down
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apply
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to 10% in 2010 from 15% in 2000.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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