You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of
men
to women
in different age
groups who ate a recommended daily meal in the United Kingdom in 2006.
Overall
it is immediately apparent that,
the gender that abided by the daily recommended meal across the various Remove the comma
apply
age
groups was females. Also
, the most abiding people for both sexes was
observed in the 55-64 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
age
group.
To begin
with, for the youth, 16% of females who were within
19-24 years Change preposition
between
took
in the required portion of food on a daily basis compared to 15% of males doing Correct word choice
old took
same
in Correct article usage
the same
this
age
group. Meanwhile, there were 2% more women
than men
who ate vegetables in the 25-34 and 35-44 age
groups.
With regards to the
Correct article usage
apply
middle aged
individuals, whilst approximately 5% more Add a hyphen
middle-aged
women
than men
consumed the recommended portions among the 45-54 age
range, those in the 55-64 year category only saw 2% more women
than men
eat the recommended food.
Turning to the elderly, it is clear that
the more a person ages, the less likely they are to eat their daily recommended portions. Interestingly, the 75 year olds
had the same percentage of Add a hyphen
75-year-olds
women
as men
eating the required meal.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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