The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The bar graph illustrates, the proportions of male and female intake of a fifth or greater part of fruits and
vegetables
per day by a different age category in The United Kingdom in 2006, as recommended by the World Health Organization.
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, the given bar graph shows the 55-64 old Linking Words
males
and girls consumed more fruits and Use synonyms
vegetables
as compared to the lowest consumed by the youngest on a daily basis.
It is conspicuous that, in the age group of 55 to 64 women consumed about 35% compared to Use synonyms
males
32%. Which was highest among all age groups. Use synonyms
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, 65-75 years old were the second highest females nearly 30%, Linking Words
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27% of Linking Words
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, 45-54 females were again dominating over Linking Words
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, which was 27% to 22% boys respectively.
Probing ahead, seniors of 75 years male and females remained constant at 25%. Use synonyms
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, 35-44 old girls were 25%, Linking Words
whereas
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were nearly 22% ate fruits and Use synonyms
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, 25-34% of humans were consumed, mother 22% and 20% of Linking Words
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, the lowest consumers of fruit and Linking Words
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mothers were slightly at 17%.Linking Words
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