The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The bar graph illustrates, the proportions of male and female intake of a fifth or greater part of fruits and
vegetables
per day by a different age category in The United Kingdom in 2006, as recommended by the World Health Organization.
Overall
, the given bar graph shows the 55-64 old males
and girls consumed more fruits and vegetables
as compared to the lowest consumed by the youngest on a daily basis.
It is conspicuous that, in the age group of 55 to 64 women consumed about 35% compared to males
32%. Which was highest among all age groups. Firstly
, 65-75 years old were the second highest females nearly 30%, whereas
27% of males
consumed natural food. Secondly
, 45-54 females were again dominating over males
, which was 27% to 22% boys respectively.
Probing ahead, seniors of 75 years male and females remained constant at 25%. Furthermore
, 35-44 old girls were 25%, whereas
males
were nearly 22% ate fruits and vegetables
. Moreover
, 25-34% of humans were consumed, mother 22% and 20% of males
respectively. Lastly
, the lowest consumers of fruit and vegetables
were 19-24 years old, guys were standing at 15% while
mothers were slightly at 17%.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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