You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope
this
letter to you
find
Correct subject-verb agreement
finds
show examples
and good
healty
Correct your spelling
health
healthy
.
Iam
Correct your spelling
I am
writing
this
letter to you about my family and
me
Change the pronoun
I
show examples
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
planning to spend a weekend and
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
would
Wrong verb form
will
show examples
stay at your seaside hotel. I will arrive
in
Change preposition
at
show examples
your hotel on
saturday
Change the capitalization
Saturday
show examples
night next week and
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
will stay around two weeks. Because, we will take a rest before we
going
Wrong verb form
go
show examples
on holiday. I need
three
Add a hyphen
three-bed
show examples
bed
Correct your spelling
bedroom
show examples
room
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
show examples
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
sleep with my family, one
room
for my parents, one
room
for my siblings in the one
room
especialy
Correct your spelling
especially
for me and my friends,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
would beautiful
room
just for
woman
Fix the agreement mistake
women
show examples
and
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
would request
estetic
Correct article usage
an estetic
show examples
the
Change preposition
for the
show examples
lamp colour and
then
bed
Correct article usage
the bed
show examples
twins, i like the second floors because i
really
Add a missing verb
am really
show examples
tired if you choose
high
Add an article
the high
a high
show examples
floor. For the payment or
Correct your spelling
accommodation
acomodation
Add a comma
acomodation,
show examples
we can
disccusion
Correct your spelling
discussion
about it immediately when
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
arrive at your hotel. I hope you can give me what
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
my family is they would,thanks for
nice
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
your attention,
iam
Correct your spelling
I am
writing
hearing
Change the verb form
to hear
show examples
from you. sincerely, GEA
Submitted by patricius.yohanes on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement
Provide more specific dates for your stay (e.g., exact date of arrival and departure).
coherence cohesion
Ensure clarity in your request for room types and arrangements. Consider using bullet points or clearer sentence structures.
coherence cohesion
Proofread your writing for grammar and spelling errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
coherence cohesion
Consider separating different points into paragraphs to improve readability and organization.
task achievement
You have included all the necessary points mentioned in the task.
task achievement
Your tone is generally polite and appropriate for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
You provided a closing statement, which is good for the structure of the letter.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!