You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
#weekend #hotel #arrangements #type #rooms #cost #activities #places #interest #addresses #sir #madam
I hope
this
letter to you find
and good Correct subject-verb agreement
finds
healty
. Correct your spelling
health
healthy
Iam
writing Correct your spelling
I am
this
letter to you about my family and me
Change the pronoun
I
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
planning to spend a weekend and Remove the article
apply
i
Change the capitalization
I
would
stay at your seaside hotel.
I will arrive Wrong verb form
will
in
your hotel on Change preposition
at
saturday
night next week and Change the capitalization
Saturday
i
will stay around two weeks. Because, we will take a rest before we Change the capitalization
I
going
on holiday.
I need Wrong verb form
go
three
Add a hyphen
three-bed
bed
Correct your spelling
bedroom
room
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
for
sleep with my family, one Change preposition
to
room
for my parents, one room
for my siblings
in the one room
especialy
for me and my friends, Correct your spelling
especially
i
would beautiful Change the capitalization
I
room
just for woman
and Fix the agreement mistake
women
i
would request Change the capitalization
I
estetic
Correct article usage
an estetic
the
lamp colour and Change preposition
for the
then
bed
twins, i like the second floors because i Correct article usage
the bed
really
tired if you choose Add a missing verb
am really
high
floor.
For the payment or Add an article
the high
a high
Correct your spelling
accommodation
acomodation
we can Add a comma
acomodation,
disccusion
about it immediately when Correct your spelling
discussion
i
arrive at your hotel.
I hope you can give me what Change the capitalization
I
which
my family is they would,thanks for Correct pronoun usage
apply
nice
your attention, Correct word choice
apply
iam
writing Correct your spelling
I am
hearing
from you.
sincerely,
GEAChange the verb form
to hear
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task achievement
Provide more specific dates for your stay (e.g., exact date of arrival and departure).
coherence cohesion
Ensure clarity in your request for room types and arrangements. Consider using bullet points or clearer sentence structures.
coherence cohesion
Proofread your writing for grammar and spelling errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
coherence cohesion
Consider separating different points into paragraphs to improve readability and organization.
task achievement
You have included all the necessary points mentioned in the task.
task achievement
Your tone is generally polite and appropriate for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
You provided a closing statement, which is good for the structure of the letter.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.