You are the manager of a restaurant that has received a letter of complaint about bad service from a member of your staff. Write a letter of apology to the person who has complained. In your letter: say how sorry you are that the person has had a poor experience explain what action has been taken against the staff member offer a free meal for four people at the restaurant as a gesture of goodwill.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to apologise for

bad

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the bad

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customer service from one of our

employee

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last

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week . I am a manager of Mcdonald's, and I feel extremely bad for

poor

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the poor

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customer experience you had

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week.We always had great

customers

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service, but

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week was really busy

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the concerts .

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shortage

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the shortage

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of staff for a particular period , most of our staff members

irritated

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still

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our

restaurant

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restaurant's

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mission is to take care of our

guest

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guests

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. I noticed that our employee did not take your order accurately ,and eventually , you ended up

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apply

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paying

extra

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$10 cash . So after

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found out the whole situation ,

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gave him

warning

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a warning

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apply

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and showed him

accurate

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procedure. I would like to give you a free meal for your family . You can visit any time at the restaurant to claim that and I will make sure that mistake should not

be happen

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again . Sorry for any

inconvienence

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inconvenience

. I look forward to your reply . Yours faithfully, Roopkamal

kaur

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Grammar and Mechanics

Be sure to proofread your letter for grammatical errors and punctuation issues to improve clarity. For instance, phrases like 'i gave him warning' should be capitalized and punctuated as 'I gave him a warning'.

Language and Style

Ensure consistent use of formal language. Your tone is suitable overall, but phrases like 'I feel extremely bad' could be better expressed as 'I regret that you had a poor experience.'

Paragraph Structure

Paragraphs should be focused on a single idea to improve coherence. Your letter can benefit from breaking down some of the information into shorter, clearer paragraphs.

Task Achievement

You addressed all parts of the task, including an apology, explanation, and a gesture of goodwill, showing a strong understanding of the task requirements.

Greeting and Closing

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal and set a respectful tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

180 words

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