ou and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request to make
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arrangements for our stay. We planned a
week
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trip to explore the
Coastalside
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Coastal side
of Arugambay. We will be
laving
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our place around 9.00 am and expect to check in to your place by 1.00pm
same
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day for 7
days
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7-day
stay and will check out
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premises at 5.00pm on
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Sunday. Altogether we are 05
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five-person
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group including me, my wife and 03 kids so I would like to book a family room with meals and
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bathroom facility as my kids always use
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at night. I prefer to have the room
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ground
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floor which will help me to manage my kids conveniently. Please share
me
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the
detail
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charge sheet for
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the weekend
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stay to work on my budget.
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, I would really be grateful if you could advise me
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places to explore near
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your location except adventure places that will not be suitable for a family. I would recommend around 15Kms vicinity if fine for me. You can contact me via email or mobile no I already provided. I am looking forward to
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hear
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from you. Yours faithfully Aravinda Jayaweera
Submitted by aravindasajith on

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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, consider reorganizing the letter to make it clearer and more concise. Breaking it into smaller paragraphs with single ideas will help.
task achievement
Ensure to proofread the letter for minor grammatical errors and typos. Phrases like 'leaving' and 'hearing' should be corrected.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are both appropriate and polite, making the overall tone suitable for a formal letter.
complete response
The letter addresses all parts of the task, including arrival and departure details, room preferences, cost inquiries, and questions about nearby activities.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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