You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graphs below show the production of and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs above contrast the production of and demand for
steel
in million
tonnes
in Britain in 2010, and they also
provide the number
of employees in the steel
industry.
According to
the first graph, both the production of and demand for steel
constantly decreased in slight fluctuation. As to the number
of workers, the graph presents a more dramatic declining trend.
From January to September, the production was basically steady, ranging between 5000 million
tonnes
in February and about 3000 million
tonnes
in August. Then
there was a small increase followed by a significant drop, decreasing from 5000 million
tonnes
in September to hardly 1000 million
tonnes
in December. The demand for steel
shows a similar trend, with nine months' relative stability and a sudden drop at the end
of 2010.
As for the number
of employees, the trend is more clear. During the first period, the number
dropped rapidly from approximately 5500 in February to 3000 in March, and this
number
remained for five months. Subsequently
, the number
further
decreased to merely 1000 at the end
of this
year.Submitted by hx88375757 on
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