The line graphs below show the production of and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs above contrast the production of and demand for
steel
in Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
in Britain in 2010, and they Use synonyms
also
provide the Linking Words
number
of employees in the Use synonyms
steel
industry.
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According to
the first graph, both the production of and demand for Linking Words
steel
constantly decreased in slight fluctuation. As to the Use synonyms
number
of workers, the graph presents a more dramatic declining trend.
From January to September, the production was basically steady, ranging between 5000 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
in February and about 3000 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
in August. Use synonyms
Then
there was a small increase followed by a significant drop, decreasing from 5000 Linking Words
million
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tonnes
in September to hardly 1000 Use synonyms
million
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tonnes
in December. The demand for Use synonyms
steel
shows a similar trend, with nine months' relative stability and a sudden drop Use synonyms
at the end
of 2010.
As for the Linking Words
number
of employees, the trend is more clear. During the first period, the Use synonyms
number
dropped rapidly from approximately 5500 in February to 3000 in March, and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
remained for five months. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
number
Use synonyms
further
decreased to merely 1000 Linking Words
at the end
of Linking Words
this
year.Linking Words
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