You have seen an advertisement from a couple who lives in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. In your letter 1)Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job 2)Say what else you could do for the family 3)Give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear …………………., I am writing this letter after seeing your advertesment on the newspaper, that you are looking a teacher to teach hindi. As you know my native language is hindi which i am very fluent. During my collage days my secound language was hindi. which will help me to teach your childrens from the very base of the language. Even i was doing workshop in rural schools as my social service project which is a additional and i accured a skill of teaching. As I am doing my PGDM in social service it will be a plus for me to be with children which can help me alot in future. After i moved to australia i was not communicating in hindi however this process will help me to be with still in touch with my native language. I can be a babysitter to for the kids when guys are busy with work have basic cooking skills and clean the house also. hope this email find you with the qualifications you are looking for. Regards,
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task achievement
Add more details to support your suitability for the job and mention any specific methods or strategies you may employ to teach the children Hindi.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your letter has a clear greeting and closing. Start with 'Dear [Name],' and end with 'Yours sincerely,' or 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your name.
coherence cohesion
Separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs for clarity. For instance, one paragraph can focus on your suitability, another on other contributions you can make to the family, and a third on why you want the job.
task achievement
You do a good job of expressing your passion for teaching and staying connected to your native language.
task achievement
You mention additional skills you can offer, such as babysitting and basic cooking, which adds to your appeal for the family.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.