Task 1 Question You should spend on this task. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

the bar chart demonstrates the

percentage

of

males

and

females

who consume

five

or more

portions

of fruits daily in the UK, grouped by

age

in 2006

accoding

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according

the

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to the

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recommendations of the

world health

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World Health

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orgnazaition

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organization

.

overall

, the

percentage

of the

females

who eat

five

portions

of fruit per day

excced

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exceeded

the

percentage

of the

males

in all of the

group

ages except the oldest

group

age

.

moreover

, the

percentage

of

male

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males

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and

females

who consume

five

portions

a day is equal. there is a steady rise

of

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in

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the

percentage

from the youngest

group

age

to the

age

35-44 in both

males

and

females

,

started

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at 15% at

aged

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ages

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19-24

ending

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and ending

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up with approximately 23% at

age

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the age

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of 35-44 for

males

, and 17% at the youngest

group

aged up to 25% for

females

. after that, the rate stayed almost constant for both

females

an

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and

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males

to the

age

of 45-54. the

group

whos ages between 55-64 are the best

in

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at

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following the world health

recommenations

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recommendations

, with the

highst

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highest

point in the graph

percentage

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the percentage

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rate reaching 33% and 35% for

males

and

females

respetively

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respectively

. after

excceding

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exceeding

the

age

range the rate of consuming

five

portions

a day started to decline

steadly

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steadily

with

a rates

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a rate

rates

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of 28% and 30% at

age

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the age

an age

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range of 65-74 for

males

and

females

.

while

at

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in

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the oldest

group

age

75 and older the rates

apeared

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appeared

to be equal for both genders at 25%.