The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph presents the
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of criminal convictions, depending on the
age
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and gender in the UK;
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, the pie chart displays the proportion of male and female prisoners in the UK's prisons.
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, men dominate in the British prison system and take more of the combined amount, but for both genders, the younger
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people have a higher rate of getting imprisoned. Focusing on the gender and maturity rate, men from the
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of 10 to 20 have the biggest rise in the
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, going from 2% to 16%, which is
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the peak
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for all genders. After the
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of 20, the proportion starts to gradually decrease, recovering to 2% for the seniors in their 60s. Meanwhile, women have the same tendency to rise from the
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of 10 to 20 to the biggest
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, going from 0% to 5% in just 10 years, but
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maturity, the
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starts to fall, and by the
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of 60, it recovers to 0%. As for the
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percentage
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, the male species clearly overtake the prison inmate number, taking 96% out of the whole proportion, leaving only the petite number of 4% for women.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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