The hotel were you and your family spent the weekend did not offer the service they had promised. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain the problem. • State what action you would like from the hotel. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear sir

hotel

Use synonyms

manger i was one of your

hotel

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coistwomers

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customers

Linking Words

last

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Last

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weekend

Punctuation problem

, me

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me and my family stade

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my family and I stayed

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in your

hotel

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and

Punctuation problem

, and

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didnt

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didn't

have the service you promised us.

you tould

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You told

us that

ower

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our

hotel

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will

Wrong verb form

would

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have a pole and we

didnt faend

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didn't find

it in

yout

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your

hotel

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First

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First,

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when we first arived we

expited

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expected

to find a

cleen

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clean

room at lest but we

didnt

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didn't

. We

sea

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saw

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died

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dead

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animal in my bed.

Linking Words

addition

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addition,

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the toilet was out of order.

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were very sad about your

hotel

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serviceservice

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service

. We

whant ower mony

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want our money

back

and

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, and

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Linking Words

addition

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addition,

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i whant

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I want

now

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know

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who was the persin responsibil of cleening ower room and get him

fauard

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forwarded

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Also

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Also,

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we want a

refind

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refund

awer

Correct article usage

the awer

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time that was

weisted

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wasted

. In samery I would need my

mony

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money

from you

becase

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because

awer

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the

wasted time in

yout

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your

hotel

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In addition

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i would like to give your

hotel

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a anwther

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another

chance.

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Jul 22, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts, but add a clear end with one main request.

task response

Task response: Use a more polite tone, for example 'I would like' and 'Could you please'.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are in a good order: problem first, then what you want.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use easy link words like 'First', 'Also', and 'Finally' in each part.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep one main idea in each paragraph to make it easy to read.

task response

Task response: You say who you are, what the problem was, and what action you want.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has clear parts and the reader can follow your main ideas.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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Disheartening
Unavailability
Inadequate
Compensation
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Subpar
Discrepancy
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Conveying dissatisfaction
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Constructive feedback
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