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Feedback and evaluation are necessary aspects of school and work, but many people dislike being evaluated. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

Rating anyone's effort is essential to improve in their respective field. Some people encourage such evaluation criteria while others oppose it and hate being measured in terms of performance. This esaay will find the reason of such behaviour and suggest best possible solution to take part in appraisals.
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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?

Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?
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“Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

It is argued that capital punishment should be made mandatory, so that violence can be kept in control. While others argue that nobody has right to take someone else life in the name of capital punishment. I personally agree that Violence can be controlled by creating death penalty fear in criminals.
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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while, others think that it is dangerous and unhealthy which opinion do you agree with. Discuss both options and give example.

It is undoubtedly true that, keeping pets at home is more common in individuals some believe that it is dangerous and harmful in child life while some oppose that thing. I agree both the views. write up will attempt to evaluate both arguments , thereby arrives at conclusion with relevant examples
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Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion

Now a day, all around the world traffic congestion became a major problem for everyone. The government is trying different methods to find a better and perfect solution for this. Some countries are funding a lot of money in the manufacturer of bicycle and encouraging their use. In my opinion, I believe this might be a good solution for this mess, however, this is not the complete solution for this issue.
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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. what is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Artificially intelligent robots are progressively replacing humans in the workforce. While it is possible that all menial jobs will eventually be done by robots, it is unlikely that jobs that require human contact will be taken over. This essay will discuss why eventually only few jobs will be carried out by people.
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It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

Over recent years, the rate of crime has dramatically increased in many countries around the world. It has been suggested that reinstating death penalty would be an effective deterrent against the growth of serious crime, but it can be argued that capital punishment is unacceptable in our society for several reasons.
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In many countries ,children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do u agree or disagree

Children are obess and unhealthy in many nations and some people belive that government must have the responsibility to solve this problem. However, l do not fully agree to that view, parents also have responsiblity for maintaining health of children.
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Some parents think children should have mobile phones , others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In modern technical era , a segment of society think that mobile phones are necessary for children ; whilst opponents opine that there is no need of mobile phones for children. I believe that mobile phones are not better of juveniles which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
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Some people believe that what children watch in television influence on children's behaviour. Others say that amount of time on television influence their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today we live in technological era there are plethora of technological gadgets have been made for childrens. In this essay some people opine that, children behavior depends on how kind of programs and show on television and other people opine that there are several effect on children behavior though show long time television programes. I will give my opinion in conclusion
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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a growing consensus among many people that individual photographers should not follow famous personalities and interfere in their personal life by capturing them private photographs. While others opine that is the price of being famous. In my opinion, the chasing of photographers for celebrities is an expected situation of fame.
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Introduce yourself and what you want to accomplish in your life?

Hello, how are you all I'm fine hope so your are too let me introduce myself my name is sheeraz ahmed I'm from Pakistan I've done my graduation from international university Islamabad in BBA hons and my specialization in Marketing after my graduation recently i joined banking sector which is also my dream to join. Furthermore i started my career since 2018 to till as a customer service officer i got learned alot from my job area...
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some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in despite of great responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that being teeneger is one of the most fascinating part of the life.In contrast,while some argue that adulthood is brought happy moments compared to teenage years, I support those who think that teenager life is beautiful because this period of life has minimum responsibilities and obligations.
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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

In todays life, children are becoming more stubborn so , to teach them parents need to take some action. I am 70 percent disagree with the statement that says teachig forcefully by slaping or scolding is the best way to teach discipline. Below is the explanation to support my words.
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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

In this today's world, the thechnology usage has risesd because it is now available easily in the means of different type of programs. Some peopel use this invention for the safety of their loved ones. But we should not forget that in many case this is being used unknowingly on other people.So, i strongly believe that the pros of this never overcome its cons. Below are the further explanations to support my statement.
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In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse/ What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?

It is argued by some people that school education should come in competition base, whereas others believe that pupils ought to learn using cooperation methods. I firmly agree that student will benefit more of co-education frame of reference. This essy will discuss both views and will show and draw a conclusin.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Guardians,schoolmates and surrounding environment act as catalysts on a student's academic achievements.Although some tend to believe that school-grades are influenced primarily by parents,others hold the position that classbuddies are more influential in this regard.However,i strongly opine that school friends and parents both are equally vital in influencing a child's achievements in school.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is true that children have refreshing effects on their minds if they grew up in an open environment. In my opinion, it is crucial that every child must go to school. In this way, they will have an exposure to their outside world and they will witness a lot of things which they can not see if they are at their home.
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People say reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I totally agree with the saying that reading book for pleasure help develop better imagination and language skill than watching TV.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

some people believe that current generation has too many options or choices when compared to olden generation. Even I acknolwledge on this point and in this essay i will be discussing the reasons for this.
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