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IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

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some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?

money is considered by some people as the most important factor to live happily.in my opinion,people can live more happily without much as their are other important factors which leads you towards happiness.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages.

Happiness index of almost all countries are decreasing day by day and one of the major reason for the same is involvement of people in building their carrier better and better, as this involves great amount of time and effort, this will definately shorten the way of enjoyment and performing any leisure activity like sports, arts, cooking and may be anything that make the individual happy. Definately, as per myself this has more disadvantages than advantages.

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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The gifts are depend on ages of people, whom are given to, such as toys for children and dresses for old lady. Moreover, some people believe that the best gifts for teenagers are money. However, others people disagree. I strongly agree with the statement and discuss both point of view.

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The benefits of computers in modern society far outweighs the disadvantages. Discuss.

A controversial topic is wether the merits of machines outweighs the disadvantages, especially in this present age. Although, there are some drawbacks accompanied with these technologies, I believe the advantages has helped mankind more.

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in many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. what do you think are the causes of this?what solutions can you suggest?

different countries of parents are worrying about their children's overweight.The problem for the overweight is junkfood and the possible solution is to restrict the junk food.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

In recent revolution, emerging technologies have used various ways like monitoring the various activities like communication, health, fitness and etc. In my opinion, these cutting edge devices are helpful different fields like space research, weather forecast, evacuate the inhabitants in critical situation. In this forum will discuss both merits and drawbacks with various situations.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

introduction, i dont like students who work during study. this is bad because it will never help students do good marks at their stuudy. i think student should focus more on their study and work hard to acheave their goals.introduction, i dont like students who work during study. this is bad because it will never help students do good marks at their stuudy. i think student should focus more on their study and work hard to acheave their goals.introduction, i dont like students who work during study. this is bad because it will never help students do good marks at their stuudy. i think student should focus more on their study and work hard to acheave their goals.introduction, i dont like students who work during study. this is bad because it will never help students do good marks at their stuudy. i think student should focus more on their study and work hard to acheave their goals.introduction, i dont like students who work during study. this is bad because it will never help...

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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the modern world. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

In the last few decades, technology has become integral part of our life. It has reached to classrooms. Many opine that, technology will replace methodological learning in foresees future, but I strongly believed that manual study should be continued.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

Health is very relevant in the society, due to the fact that shows the quality of life of a population in a especific country. In my opinion, the prevention of health issues is more important than the treatment, because reduces the number of news diseases and decreases the amount of money that the government should afford to treat them.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?”

Museums play a pivotal role in protecting our cultural heritage by conserving, restoring and presenting a wide range of artifacts and items of scientific, historical and cultural significance. Some museums are free for everyone while others charge visitors for entrance. This essay agrees with that imposing entrance fees drives more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay we will discuss both points of view and state my own opinion.

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Digital communication technology such as email, instant messaging and social media has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Communication and connections between people has improved considerably due to advancement in digital communication technology such as email, instant messaging and other forms of social media. Though these forms of communication have improved connections between people it certainly is not preferred by many still in these days.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Toys for children are the most spectacular gifts which they would love to request from thier parents and in return would become thier most choosen gifts. Kids irregardless of age would basically ask various types of playing materials or sometimes gadgets that leads them to become socially aloof and not economically wise.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Environment is everything that is around us. It can be living (biotic) or non-living (abiotic) things. It includes physical, chemical and other natural forces. Living things live in their environment. They constantly interact with it and adapt themselves to conditions in their environment. In the environment there are different interactions between animals, plants, soil, water, and other living and non-living things.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Every country have their own language and traditional practices which make them unique. Living in a country where the language and tradition can cause a barrier for communication is difficult and a serious problem. But i do feel that this obstacle can be overcomed with time. I strongly disagree that this issue can cause a serious social and practical problem.

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some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundation subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides

Whether or not to teach mathematics at school is becoming increasingly controversial. While some parents think that learning mathematics is no longer relevant, other parents maintain that it is an important subject. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.

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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There are many programs organised by schools and one of them is an international student exchange program through which one country's student visiting another country and exchange many things like education, culture, hobbies and so on.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, itvis sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some people which are having a birth talentbin any field while it is sports or music. Some pupils do not have that talent they neef ti learn basis of it. To some extent i am agree with the statement. i will discuss my views related to it in upcoming paragraphs.

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Using chemicals in food production and preservation has more disadvantages due to its effect on human health but there are some benefits derived from it.

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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Problem of getting jobs with increasing age is bitter tough in some contries and few are thinkg to prevent this situation as well. Almost all contries who are facing this situation are from western contries.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere? Do you agree or disagree?

The specified topic is very pertinent as the same is being discussed in multiple global forums. Some mortals think that government is merely waste money in arts whereas other think that expenses could be utilized on some important facilities for folks.

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