IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1728

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss.

Indeed, in the modern era, the job competition is increased day by day. Irrefutably, for getting a good job education play a fundamental role. But there are a debatable issue that some masses opine that attending in a university is only one way to get a better job but other people believe that only school education is must because some fields do no require any degree from university. I will shed light both views in upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Students are encouraged for job or travel between their high school and university study for one year in some countries. On doing so, they get exposure to the market that will enhance their progress but some may turn towards wrong path during this period. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of working or travelling between completing high school and university studied.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is is a positive of negative development?

Nowadays, the number of people who choose to communicate online are increasing because of the rapid development of information technology. In my opinion, this way of communication can have a positive impact on our lives even though it has some drawbacks .

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percentage of overweight children in western countries have increased by 20% in the last 10 years. is technology to be blamed

The last ten years have witnessed various developments in terms of technology and interventions This has led to a dramatic increase in the business of fast food chains and restaurants. Therefore, it is not a surprise that the percentage of overweight children in western countries have increased by 20% in the last 10 years. This essay will discuss how the development of technology and busy lifestyle has led to an unhealthy lifestyle and an increase in the BMI of the children in developed nations, posing a major problem: Obesity.

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The natural resources such as oil, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we serve these problems?

The god gifted reserves are many for instance, oil and clean water which are being utilized at an extremely soaring pace. As these resources are on the verge of extinction for the future generation due to limited in quantity. However, such problems can be tackled by opting relevant solutions.

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Some people think that people are responsible for their happiness. Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about who is responsible for our own happiness. While some believe that it is associated with some circumstances surrounding their life, I agree with those who feel only individuals have control over their happiness.

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People today rarely interact with their neighbors, and this is having a harmful effect on local communities. What are the possible causes of this trend? What can be done to address it

Majority people have less mixed with their next-doors and it could be negative impact on local communities. This trend is mainly due to guarding their privacy and interest in social media. However, there are a number of measures that can implemented to remedy a situation of lack of interaction with neighbors.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent u agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world, it is undoubtedly true that everyone wishes to do something good for the society to improve the living standards for all. Some people concur that unpaid social service is to be made mandatory aspect of high school programs. However, I partially agree with this statement as I believe that it should be one's own desire to work for the neighborhood.

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Some people think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think the government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

It’s believed that government focus should be on economy improvement, whereas others think social services such as health and education systems are more important to be focused on. I agree to economical view and I will talk about my reasons.

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Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding, while others think it is a waste of money. do you agree or disagree?

It is no secret that a wedding is the most expensive party most people will throw. Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on such a special day while others believe that it is not worth it. This assay will discuss why I partially disagree on spending money on a wedding.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.

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Most of the world's problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that most of the overpopulation leads to a variety of issues in the world. Personally, I completely agree with this statement.

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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

An ideal society where the human can fulfill all their desires has not been accomplished yet despite much efforts that have been made. Therefore, I tend to believe that instead of setting a high standard (*), we should build a society where moral values, equal , and justice are highly respected. (**)

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Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that the government is responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that cleanliness of residential areas is responsible by the government officials while others believe that locals are the one to do it. Personally, I do believe this shared objective can be achieved by the combined efforts of civil bodies and residents considerably.

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In many countries today, people in cities either rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Following the number of population who prefers to live only in the one or two generations are increasing, the traditional family formats are demolished. To illustrate my point, I think the trend is a natural phenomenon by changing the people's preference and behaviour.

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Should countries restrict foreign companies? Do you agree or disagree?

There are two factors to develop a country including internal and external investment. Some people believe that foreign investors are unnecessary for the countries and they need to be limited. Personally, I strongly support the foreign investors and government should open the doors to invite them in.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

Nowadays there are many food from overseas and other countries in almost every country. I support that some of producers can import from other countries. This essay will support this idea.

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In many countries, traditional customs are being lost. Why you think is this happening?What schools and parents can do to stop it?

Time is changing and so are individuals’ attitudes towards out-dated convections in many nations. Although there is an array of motives behind their gradual disappearance, the solution is for educational system and families which will be meticulously scrutinized throughout the paragraphs.

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In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country?

In the olden days, majority of individuals were multitalented but as time passed the idea of expertise in different fields became an old fashioned one. Nowadays, people pay attention to establish a single career and are less inclined towards being a polymath.

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Some people think that the government should put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat more healthily. Do you agree or disagree?

Time is changing and so are individuals’ attitudes towards food choice. Whether should be put tax on junk foods or not has sparked a heated controversy. Although it is true that making them costly can be profitable, in my view, other more practical solutions generally are at disposal to be proposed, which will be meticulously scrutinized throughout the paragraphs.

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