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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In today’s world, serving long sentences in prison is considered as an effective measure to rehabilitate people who committed serious crimes. However , there are a large proportion of them reoffend crimes after being punished. In this essay, I will propose some solutions to solve this problem.

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative that positive effects on young children. Agree or disagree ?

Yes, I agree with mentioned statements. Nowadays young children are more interested in technical devices like computer, mobile, laptop etc. Definitely, it's very true that technology is most useful for our life development.

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Some people think that media (newspapers) should publish information of people's private lives. While, others think newspaper should be controlled so that they don't publish news on people's lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that in the newspaper, people's personal life can be discussed while others argue that they should be stopped in publishing such information. However, I believe that the mass media should be controlled by the government so that they respect the privacy of each individual and publish what is required. Let us delve deeper into this issue in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Sports, as the Olympic Games or the champions league, is one of the most popular events on television. A lot of people around the world wait in anticipation for months till the event start and then spend much time watching it through the screen in pleasure. Others, on the other hand, think it is a waste of invaluable time which could be spend differently.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as source as they released from prison What do you think are the cause of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

It is a fact that numbers of criminal can always find a smooth way to commit a serial crime. There are several reasons for such condition and few visible influences too. Along with that, the continuous increasing demand and over ambitious may lead towards the violation. Both the aspects are going to explain in the ensuring paragraph.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Nowadays, the film industry has made significant contributions to each country's economy. However, there is a fact that people have a preference watching foreign movies over domestically made ones. This essay will discuss several key reasons for this phenomenon and explain the financial assistance that the government should have to promote the local film industry.

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The develpment among out society is improving people lives and therefore the way we live. However, such change also can bring disadvantages.

Nowadays, people are becoming more aware that our planet is becoming in danger faster than ever before due to human being activities, thus raising concerns about the future of humanity.

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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

Nowadays most of the experts in various fields working in small enterprises are migrating to other countries for higher salaries. This scenario leads to various problems in the development of a county, which can be curtailed by following suitable measures which I will discuss in this essay

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Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A society is made of hard work and wisdom of the older generation as well as up and coming young people whose innovations help aid progress in many areas in current society.Many countries believe older people are the cornerstone in nations' development and has priceless value.Whereas others insist that youth plays an indelible part in progress of everyday life in a country.I believe youth are of greater value than older people as they play a crucial part in progress of current culture.

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Some people believe that exercise is the key to good health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

While health is increasingly popular, it continues to be rather controversial because some people claim that doing more exercise is the most important for health than having a balanced diet. There are valid arguments on both sides of this very topical debate, and they will be discussed hereunder.

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There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is traditional music of a country more important tha international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In this day of age, different kinds of music genres can be found in the globe. There is no doubt that music is of critical importance for people for several reasons. Despite the huge popularity of international music, I unswervingly believe that traditional music still more important.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

As the economy in some countries is getting stable, more jobs opportunities are being created which is increasing the employment rate. Some countries prefer hiring an individual with more experience rather than considering the knowledge they possess. I believe both are equally important, however experience should be considered first. In this essay, we will discuss why the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take interest in art?

Despite the fact that art is a crucial part of culture herigtage worldwide, the majority of people nowadays tend to gravitate towards fields like science, tecnology and business. In my point of view, the underlying cause is the development of technology, but this problem can be gradually resolved by proper promotion.

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many parents complain about violence promoted to their children through video games, TV programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Many parents complain that, watching their children violent movies and play various militant games has a negative impact on their children’s upbringing. I think the main reason for this is that Kids have a lot of free time. To solve this problem effectively, I think that, additional interesting courses should be organized in schools by parents and school administration so that children can spend their free time productively.

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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Air travel is widely used nowadays. Undoubtedly, air travel was used for the upper class a few years ago. While some people argue that only wealthy people are benefited from this, I believe that many airlines companies have offered great promotions so even ordinary people can afford air travel.

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Many students take part-time jobs whilst studying in university. Is it a good or bad idea?

Nowadays, it's common that students do part-time jobs along with their studies.In my opinion, it is better to learn new skills in university and practice these skills in a job.

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Nowadays, people always throw old things and have new things, in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?

In this contemporary world, economic success helps people improve their living standards therefore, they tend to buy modern products willingly and throw away old things. I agree that the advance of technology and attractive advertisement lead people to buy the latest products, however, there are detrimental effects that are undeniable such as exploitation of natural resources, or industrial waste.

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Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.

In modern era, number of masses are unhealth and lazy as compared to past time.There are various reasons behind this development. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss both the causes and remedies of this advancement.

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Ques: The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

For centuries humans have shown utter disregard to the plight of the nature. It is often argued that rising environmental issues across the globe are the responsibility of the government and large organisations only. I slightly disagree with this thought and think ordinary people can also make a huge difference.

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Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Why?

Children are born free and deciding the right age for starting a formal education in schools has been a topic of contention for a while now. While some parents believe that children should be allowed to be at home until the age of six or seven the others believe that it should be started as soon as possible. While there is no right or wrong answer to how you raise your child, I believe three to four years of age is the right time to enrol them in the school.

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