IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1793

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Even though modern medicine has increased the life expectancy in general, the overall quality of life has taken a plunge due to health problems caused by the modern lifestyle. While some recommend a complete go back to traditional medicine, may others including me recommend a combination of traditional and modern medicines to adequately address the situation because traditional medicines were designed at a time that did not take the modern lifestyle into account.

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It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Multiculturalism, mixed student from various socio-economical background and different ability is common system at schools in present time. There have advantages and disadvantages of this process; however, I believe students can mix up each other at the school thus they could competition each other

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Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country. To what extent do u you agree or disagree?

A common trend in recent times is government giving helping hand to other countries in need. Some people are of the opinion that the government should not do this, but should channel their resources to help challenged individuals in their country live a better life. I strongly believe that there is so much our leaders can do to alleviate suffering and poverty in the nation ,this should be their prime focus rather than giving out help.

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Some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together by making the world smaller. Others disagree, claiming that the internet has made people and communities more isolated because they no longer need to leave home and interact with others. Discuss both views.

The internet is an undividable part of most people’s lives nowadays. It is the main source that helps us in keeping the bridges with many people, but at the same time this is where the thoughts split. Some people think of it as of a solution, the others disagree, saying that it is no more than isolation.57

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More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

A growing number of organizations and individuals are likely to prefer communication through the internet to direct communication. It is obvious that it certainly has both pros and coms in terms of convenient and feeling. I will mention both point of view.

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Having more money and less free time is better that earning less money and more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

This is widely said that wealthy people have good quality of life but less time to spare as compared to people with less salary who have more spare occasion. I am of the opinion that people with less capital are more contend and happier than the latter one.

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Today every large city facing traffic congestion.what are the causes for this and how can be tackle it

Today,it fact that traffic congestion, which is growing concern in every developing city.The causative factos for this trend and preventive measures to combat this issue is explicated in ensuring paragraph.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems do this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

It is not uncommon that a vast majority of big companies spend an enormous amount of money to promote their products in order to allure the customers. While this essay will discuss the severe problems caused by this trend including the closure of local businesses and making children more demanding, it will also propose some effective solutions to actively motivate the people to purchase local products in detail.

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Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that the ministry is wasting public fund on craft there are much and more important things to spend money on such as medical and education services. Art is an indulgence for a few developed countries, however; most other nations have other priorities.

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One problem that every major city facing is traffic congestion.what are the causes of it? How should tackle it?

Many major cities and large towns are facing with drastic increase in myriad of vehicles getting on to the roads leading to traffic blocks. This essay with discuss both the problem and solutions in order to reduce the traffic congestion.

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In some countries, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.Sometimes the govt has to pay for this care. Who should be responsible for our old people ?

Old age is inevitable and every human has to go through this stage of life.Needless to say, old people have the most experiences to deal with different situations and great contributions to society throughout their complete life but remorseful to say they left unattended by family and relatives in the last years. To improvise the condition, undoubtedly Government took some steps like Home Care Cetre, Old Age Welfare Scheme and building the community centre for good nourishment, although although it is a considerable factor who should take care the complete responsibility.

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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely acknowledged that Music is whether to entertain the public or make a positive impact on society, which is a popular issue. Different individuals have their opinions on how they react to Music. In this sense, it is worth ascertaining this rather polemical issue.

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Emails have had a huge impact on professional and social communication. However, their effects have been positive as well as negative. Do the advantages, of using email outweigh the disadvantages?

Digital mailing concept has revolutionized the corporate industry as well as the traditional communication methods. It is certainly true that the use of email has greatly changed the way we communicate with each other at work also socially. Though all the effects of this innovation have not been positive. In my opinion, I think the advantages enormously outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some high school require all students to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. which of these two school policies you think is better?

A highly controversial issue appears to relate to whether students should be required to attend school in uniforms or they can wear whatever they want. In my opinion, uniform can promote equality and discipline among students, whereas wearing independently might lead to bullying.

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People shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In today's world , Individuals shopping habits have been increasing in recent years due to the availability of new products in market . Shopping habits is mostly influenced by the age group they belong to rather than other factors . I partially disagree with the given statement however , every coin has two side so , both should taken into consideration .

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Many young people are leaving homes in rural areas to study or work in urban cities. What are the reasons for this? DO the advantages of this development outweighs the disadvantages?

Nowadays, migration from rural areas to metropolitan cities has becomes a common trend among youngsters in search of employment. While extention of this can be less disadvantageous ,I believe there are more benefits related to this trend .

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Some people think that governments should provide unemployed citizens with free telephones and opportunities for using internet to help them to find a job. What to extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there are ongoing debates on solving the problem of unemployment. According to the arguments, some people state that unemployed citizens should be provided with the ways of connection by giving them free telephones and the opportunity for using the internet in order to support them in finding a job. Below I am going to analyse the practice from both points of views before coming to a reasonable conclusion.

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Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In present days, a continuously increasing number of people are concerned about the issue that many of them opt to purchase more the readymade foods than cook at home. However, whether purchasing readymade food is a controversial issue. Some people say that it has some merits while others maintain that this trend has more demerits for us. I think I am in favor of the former opinion that readymade foods have important effects and homemade foods have plenty of nutrients to live a healthy life.

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Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved.

Nowadays, doctors are in the centre of attention because of COVID19 pandemic. In ordinary times they are also quite popular spot to visit for many people who are addicted to visiting doctors too often. They usually do not really stick to a doctor’s recommendation, instead they prefer to put the whole pressure of them staying in a good shape on their doctors.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In this competitive world, students nowadays have the tendency to leave a gap between lower and higher studies. For many students, this leisure year gives an extended period of time for learning additional knowledge. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will spark my views on some of the reasons why not joining the university after school is so famous and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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