IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1792

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it may be noticed that more and more people emigrated to another country to work and live for the convenience of transportation and modern communications. From my perspective, it has lots of benefits when compared to minor drawbacks that it might bring.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health of citizens is an important factor in the progress and future development of the country. In regard to this, I would say that government should provide some of the free health services to people as the high cost treatment is unaffordable by huge sections of the society. It caters to many reasons which are as follows.

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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Factors such as the increasing unemployment have forced many families with children to move abroad. The effects of such decision has influenced in a certain way the children's life. Although the impact of a new life seems to affect them negatively, in the long run they could be aware of the advantages of this life's change.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Performing arts have gained more attention in the school system nowadays. Although some people are still not aware of their importance, they bring a great contribution for student's capacities. In my opinion, the importance of these subjects is proportioned as the relevance of other subjects, expecially in the early education because they bring advantages for both disabled and not disabled children.

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What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

Due to the phenomenon of globalisation, international market has widened its territory to every nook and corner in the world.Hence,propel have got the opportunity to buy any goods and services from all over the world.Therefore,local business affected by this purchasing behaviour of pople.The following paragraph would discuss the pros and cons of this concept and few suggestions to curb the menace due to the same.

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Some people think that we live in a society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that this is improving our lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable fact that showcasing our wealth and possessions have risen in popularity. Some believe that wealth and materialism are given too much importance in our society, while others argue that this trend can contribute to a positive progression in our lives. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments, and show my support for the former view.

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Many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to change the type of work. Discuss both the views and state your own opinion.

Nowadays, an individual's working preferences is immensely different from last two decades. Whether one should stick to a similar job in their entire life or not is a topic of discussion. Some people opine that working in a similar kind of profession has more advantages over moving to a different job, while others support the same. I am of the opinion that one should change their professional area after some profound period of time.

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Some people believe online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that online reading is suitable medium for kids to pick up reading skills, while other are others who think it is better to go for printed materials. In my opinion, I believe that adapting the online reading practice is essential for kids in this modern world.

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More people than ever before are traveling to other countries now. Why? Is this a positive development or negative development?

The twenty-first century has witnessed some significant developments, one of which is the increasingly affordability of transportation. Along with this trend, more and more people have opportunities to travel abroad, however it also brings the effect of this phenomenon into question. To my mind, an increasing traveling abroad is a positive development which is improving our economy as well as lifestyles.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In the past, when students used to apply for university degrees or any other higher degree courses, they used to prefer the institutions of their own province for this purpose, but as the time passed , a new trend of studying abroad has been seen from last 2 or 3 decades, specifically in the last 7 to 8 years. There are both advantages and the disadvantages of this development.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays It is considered by many that acquiring a university degree is important for future employment, but in the meantime, others think that taking up any work and gaining experiences is a better alternative. To my way of thinking unless a higher education is awarded by university, a job is not guaranteed.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In the old days, museums used to be thought suitable for historians and archeologists only, but not for the ordinary visitor; however, the popularity of museums is more and more expanded. Every year, national museums welcome a large number of visitors including students, scholars and foreign tourists and thus to lead to a heated-debate. Some people propose that charge for admission is necessary to a historical place; whereas, others claim that it should be free. Both opposite opinions have own benefits and drawbacks.

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“Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms of re-educated and rehabilitated using, for instance, community service programs.”

Criminal Justice and human rights of criminals often a debatable topic all over the world and ‘lesser of two evil. Some argue that they should be penalised for a longer period, while others believe that criminal should send it to rehabilitation and education centres to give a brand-new life. Having considered both the viewpoints,I personally have the notion that, it should be depended on the crime’s backdrop and its severity.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The authorities of most countries consider the advancement of the economic as their priorities. While some citizens opine that the proper of other aspect of society are as much monumental as the economic for nation. I believe the economic is more essential for the country and in the following, I will consider the both point of view.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country police force or military force , such as army , while others think that women are not suitable for these kind of jobs . Discuss both views and given your opinion ?

Salad days , both man and women plays a significant role in development of society . Certain human beings opine that there should be equality between males and females in a nation's police force or military force such as army , while others claim that females are not fit for these type of jobs . These essay will discuss both the given perspectives and my opinion .

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In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals think that the best way to punish those who get engaged in any kind of crime should be to sent them to jail. I totally disagree and the following essay will explain why.

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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

There is a growing consensus supporting the view that women fill the shoes of parenting better in comparison to men, on the other hand, there are a few who believe that both genders are equally good. In my opinion, I completely agree with the initial notion because of women's inherent multi-tasking and bonding skills. Further paragraphs will shed more light on this opinion.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Which are the advantages and disadvantages?

A significant part of society accesses social platforms with the main goal of interacting with others as well as acknowledging the recent events. Although there are benefits related to the convenience of these medias, some drawbacks regarding the negative human behavior n can be mentioned.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.?

Recent years have witnessed the significant growth in the number of citizen in large cities. The industrialization and globalization has led to an enormous people fleeing the countryside and looking for better future in urban areas. There are various problems of this tendency on both society and the environment, which goverments should make more efforts to tackle.

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Some people say that Government should break down all the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been a continuous debate on demolishing old buildings, in order to construct the new ones. Industrialized community believes that constructing modern structures is the major source to boost economy, whereas history lovers consider the monument an important tool for tourism. In my opinion, these historic places represent our culture and should be preserved.

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