IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1791

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Undoubtedly, technology has a drastic effect on people’s life. In the last century, people’s communication has been altered by technology a lot. In turn, this essay will discuss the impact of technology on people’s interaction and also its advantages and disadvantages.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, videos games & other types of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled ?

Nowadays, some parents are concerned that their children’s violent behaviour may be closely connected with the increased amount of violence in a range of entertainment programs. Possible side effects of such leisure activities may be excessive aggression and inability to distinguish between fantasy and reality, whereas banning violent scenes and games may become a possible solution to this issue.

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is true that wild animals are on the edge of extermination to a greater extent as well as on the threatened list. There are variety of possible reasons for the extinction of wildlife, but steps can definitely be taken by government to tackle this problem.

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Some people think a crime should always have a fixed punishment, like for murder, whereas other think you should take the circumtances of the crime into account. What is your view point?

Punishment is such an important rule that goverments should have in their country in order to maintain and control society. Many people believe that fixed punishment has to be realised to each crime, but some people refuse this statement because of some reasons. They come up with reason that every criminal has different motives while they commit the same offence, even it is murder. I strorngly agree that punishment given by the judge must consider circumtances of each crime.

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What do you think is the greatest contribution of your country in the field of science and technology? Describe it and explain why it is of great importance. Give details and examples in your explanation.

Pioneer scientists all support the idea that some of the most considerable areas that can bring enormous benefits to economy of nation, development of vital sectors, education area etc. are the fields of science and technology. Accordingly, I completely in the same opinion with this statement of scientists as well. However, unfortunately, according to my observations and evidences that we notice regarding the attempts of our current government governing approximately for the past 20 years, certain investment on technological improvements and scientific researchers are not visibly noteworthy. In the following paragraphs, I will tend to demonstrate the way our authorities refer to and benefit from the significance of the contribution to these subjects.

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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Throughout history, the cases concerning environment has been maintaining one of the most considerable problem for both earth and humanity due to the lack of sufficient judgment of authorities against responsible faces for causing this catastrophe is argued by enormous number of people. As far as I observe, I extremely support this opinion and, in this essay, will be demonstrated arguments with specific illustrations.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Recently, there has been much interest in gaining a better understanding of the effective approach to reduce the number of serious crimes committed each year. Some people feel that capital punishment should be used to deter criminals from committing crime. However, I agree with those who are of the opinion that there are other effective steps that can be taken by the government to achieve this goal. In this essay, I will provide the rationale for both viewpoints as well as adduce all the arguments which might support my own belief.

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Many believe that religion is not a good thing, others say it is. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

An essential problem of the 21st century is world pollution. Currently the environment is so much contaminated that urgent measures should be taken. The single individual cannot be blamed for the world pollution, however every person should take care of his or her habitat. In addition, it is vital that environmental issues should be treated internationally.

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Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Travelling has gained popularity all over the globe. However, it is argued that this activity has a negative impact upon the environment on the country where they travel to. In my perspective, I believe that this statement isn’t entirely true. Besides, I will give solution which visitors should do to minimize the impact on the natural environment and local cultures in this essay.

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Countries with long average working hours are economically more successful than those countries which do not work long hours. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this competitive era, countries are attempting to be more economically successful than other countries. Some of them devote a considerable amount of life to work. In my opinion, however, assigning their lives play a crucial role, it might have a detrimental effect on economic growth because of stress.

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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together.

Modern technology and traditional culture may seem like two completely opposite subject to some people. But in today’s world these two subjects are more related to each other than you could possibly imagine. In this essay I will discuss how for keeping traditions alive these days we need to include technology.

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Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing?

Many people are used to buy unimportant stuffs, which they do not really need and try to have the newer stuffs in comparison with their old ones they already have. While there are some reasons why individuals buy goods they do not need, I believe that it is a harmful habit.

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Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing?

Simultaneous with economic growth, plenty of goods are being traded across the world, which in variety of cases seems unessential and even sometimes unreasonable. Continue the ongoing process of buying products excessively has a huge impact on the ecosystem; therefore, considering the causes and effects of such extravagant lifestyle would be advisable.

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Some people believe that everyone has right to university education. Therefore, government should make university education free for eyeryone, no matter what their financial bockground is. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there are so many debates about public education around the world which is included university studies as well. Some individuals discussed studding in universities must afford by the government , while the others believe anyone who want to achieve the higher level of education should pay himself. Whereas, the first group have some noticeable reasons but, the later is more close to my view because the universities can provide a situation to grow the society in professional subjects as well as social skills, which boost the communities’ collective well-being.

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it is illegal for employers to rejecting a person applying for a job because of her or his age . Negative or positive development.

Nowadays, Applicants are being judged not only by their job experiences but also by their ages. And this is considered illegal in many countries. I believe that this is a positive trend owing to some officially clear reason as follows.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?

There is an ongoing debate amongst people about how a nation development can be measured. In my opinion, I believe that apart from economic progress, other factors should also be considered.

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it may be noticed that more and more people emigrated to another country to work and live for the convenience of transportation and modern communications. From my perspective, it has lots of benefits when compared to minor drawbacks that it might bring.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health of citizens is an important factor in the progress and future development of the country. In regard to this, I would say that government should provide some of the free health services to people as the high cost treatment is unaffordable by huge sections of the society. It caters to many reasons which are as follows.

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Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Factors such as the increasing unemployment have forced many families with children to move abroad. The effects of such decision has influenced in a certain way the children's life. Although the impact of a new life seems to affect them negatively, in the long run they could be aware of the advantages of this life's change.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Performing arts have gained more attention in the school system nowadays. Although some people are still not aware of their importance, they bring a great contribution for student's capacities. In my opinion, the importance of these subjects is proportioned as the relevance of other subjects, expecially in the early education because they bring advantages for both disabled and not disabled children.

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