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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Food is doing a significant process in our body. Therefore, having a good meal is more beneficial and it gives more strength. However, nowadays, a major number of kids are overweight and that could lead to serious circumstances in their future. And also, bad food habits could impact on their health and health maintenance.

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Some people become famous in their early age. Is it bad or good ?

With the advent of media, achieving fame has become quite easy for people whether they are young or adults. Therefore, it is often argued that is it advantageous or detrimental to be a celebrity at a young age? In my opinion, even though being famous blesses one with some boons, it also brings numerous negatives. This essay will discuss what are the demerits of popularity youngsters.

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Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is an irrefutable fact that internet plays a significant role in our life and is becoming popular among people at a fast rate. Some people assert that the internet has a lot of benefits, whereas others assume it has created more problems. In my opinion, there are certain benefits of internet yet it is hard to overlook its drawbacks. I will shed light on both facets in detail before a conclusion can be drawn.

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SOME PEOPLE DO NOT ALLOW CHILDREN TO PARTICIPATE IN GAMES’ SPORTS OR COMPETITIN

In recent times, observations have been made about parents believing in restraining their children from participating in activities, sports and competitions to keep them away from the sense of loosing and allow only to compete where everyone gets a prize. On the contrary, some people prepare children from a younger age to participate without the fear of losing or winning.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is true that raising children is critical to their future, and parents should be in careful preparation. Personally, I disagree with the idea that all mothers and fathers should be forced into taking parenting lessons.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The myriad of traditional customes in many countries are the typical identity on how people are being classified. Thus, some people believe that the way people dress up is the definitive indicator of their culture and character. The goal of this essay is to breakdown reason why I strongly agree with the above-mentioned statement.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is no iota of doubt that children these days are increasingly spending sizeable number of hours in viewing television. Although, television by no means is a substitute of books which have always been an effective learning aid but this trend clearly explains the reason as to why children are less informed and educated these days.I strongly second my stance with the above statement.

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Some people think that too much money is spent on repairing old buildings,instead of repairing old buildings,that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buildings are a part of country's heritage.Some sections of the society opine that instead of spending money on renovating old buildings ,the same should be utilised for grounding them and inturn constructing new structures .I strongly disagree with the above statement evidencing in this essay as to why it is important to restore buildings in their original form.

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How coronavirus effects? for causes and implementation for it?

The number of people killed by the coronavirus outbreak has overtaken the global death toll of the Sars epidemic, with at least 800 deaths now confirmed.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

At present time, people want to earn more money but many people claim that they should be entitled to save all the money which are earn by them and they should not have to spend money for paying tax to the government.

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Some People believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to take care of their own health.Others believe that government should make sure that their citizen are healthy. discuss both views

Health is one of the most important topics of discussion not only for individuals but also for the world as a whole. On the one hand, it is a belief of a few, that individuals should be hold responsible for their health while on the contrary other believes that government is responsible for maintaining the health of its population. This essay will discuss on how an individual along with the government plays an important role in maintaining a healthy body.

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happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Life, nowadays become very hectic and difficult to live in most part of the place. People are living in poverty and in such circumstances which make life harder. However, these problems can be catered by happiness, but sometimes, it become difficult to understand the mode of happiness. In this essay I will discuss some points to achieve this.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age( 65 years) for everybody regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive pension at earlier age. • Do you agree? • Which type of worker do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reason for your answer and include any recent example from your knowledge of experience.

Most governments have their specific rules and regulations regarding the age of retirement of their citizens. Many of them have retirement age around 65 years, regardless of their occupation. In this essay we are going to discuss importance of early retirement and pension benefit at an earlier age for workers involved in certain stressful profession.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Some argue that punishment should be used in educating children what is right and what is wrong has been a controversial issue. Although I partly agree the statement, punishment applied should be positive and education and absolutely exclude corporal ones.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world, it is common belief that participate in unpaid community service program would be mandatory for greater out comes in many aspects of humanity. Although, it is important to some parents would not agree to this because, they do not want their children to go out and clean the city at their younger age, personally, I strongly believe that parents should encourage their children to do free community work for a society. In the following essay, I will discuss this issue using some example to support my views and demonstrates points. However, the unpaid community service should be compulsory to high school programmes have their own positive and negative sides and in following essay we will discuss them in detail.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world, it is common belief that participate in unpaid community service program would be mandatory for greater out comes in many aspects of humanity. Althouh, it is important to some parents would not agreed to this because, they do not want their children to go out and clean the city at their younger age, personally, I strongly believe that parents should encourage their childerens to do free community work for a soceity. In the following essay, I will discuss this issue using some example to support my views and demonstrates points. However, the unpaid community service should be compulsory to high school programmes have their own positive and negative sides and in following essay we will discuss them in detail.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is irrefutable that more and more students are nowadays doing part-time jobs while they study so that they can reduce the burden on parents and become independent, but it is often argued that because of this day also suffer from feeling anxious and stressed, and also find themselves not performing well in their studies. In this essay, I, intend to discuss what causes this phenomenon and suggest some ways forward.

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

Large cities are known to be the sanctuary of dreamers likewise for the law-offenders. More and more beings move in the said places to pursue their career and have a justifiable remuneration. Consequently, urban places become overcrowded and traffics, particularly to work zones, are obnoxiously heavy. Apart from that, massive and progressive towns pessimistically turn into a criminal zone. Clearly, residences in spacious urban areas are troublesome.

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some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government's primary role. discuss both views and give your opinion.

The protection responsibility of environment is debatable. Some people believes that saving environment from dust, pollution is every individuals role while others do not, they say that it is up to government to secure our surroundings from such things. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why this duty has to be shared between both officials and citizens.

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It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important.

Increasing population feels that animals are used by humans for multiple purpose and that it should be stopped. On the other hand, several people also believe that animals are required for various human needs including nutrition, travel and research work. Use of animals for human needs has been in the ecosystem from the very early period and that it continues till today, but the extent of exploitation has been increased. This has resulted in concern among a number of people. Human needs animal for several purpose that benefits not only humans but also animals. To maintain the balance of the nature the use of animals is very much required by humans.

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