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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method which one do you think is more effective.

It is argued by few educationalists that the students ought to be taught in groups while others believe they should be encouraged to study alone. In my opinion ,both the techniques have few advantage,but it should be decided on the basis of field of study.

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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a dramatic increase in the number of children have got the obsesity, especially in some developed countries, where a massive amount of unhealthy food is consumed on a daily basis. Many people suppose that the government should do something to improve this issue. From my persceptive, I completely disagree with this view and believe that the government as the only one who is responsible for combating the childhood obesity crisis.

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It is inevitable that traditional culture will be lost when technology develops . Technology and traditional culture are incampitable

In the current scenario,it is believed by some that advancement of automated devices will lead to the fall of traditional culture .In my view ,I reckon with the statement that traditional culture and machine is incompatible

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world

Often, one is coming across multiple cases where individuals are relying on solar energy to do mundane household chores instead of other forms of resources available. In my opinion, this is an outstanding solution but not something on which one can be dependent on in the future. I can cite numerous reasons for the same.

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Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

There is no iota of doubt that mostly individuals prefer using the cards rather than cash . This phenomenon offering va multifurious benefits to people , however sometimes a couple of problem emerge due to some reasons.the following paragraph would shed light on both the pros and cons of the plastic cash

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It is inevitable that Traditional culture will be lost as technology.Technology and traditional culture are inevitable. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

In the current scenerio,it is believed by some that advancement of technology will lead to the fall of traditional culture .In my view ,I reckon with the statement that traditional culture and technology are incompatible

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Our world is facing many problems currently, among which the increasing trash is becoming a concerning issue. This essay will discuss the cause of this grim situation and suggests step the government authorities can adopt to curb the amount of garbage collected on a daily basis.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

It is considered that, in this day and age, as people, we have too many options available for everything. I agree with this statement because currently due to more options quality of our lives are improving to a great extent. My explanation is argued in pursing paragraphs.

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Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Due to advancement in IT, we do not belong to a big plant earth; we belong to a small global village. Where everything is well connected and so, international news as a subject come under a debatable question. So, people are divided on the issue of whether students should study international news or whether it is off the mark in secondary school curriculum. Personally, I side with the latter view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people hold the opinion that it is worth to share an information and data as much as possible in scientific experiments, business and academic researches, while others are cautioned to provide those resources free of cost. I strongly believe sharing information allow people to develop society by providing knowledge which can be very helpful for many student, young scientist and even to a layman. However, scientist should categorize important data and make available those information only after some consideration or restriction.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

People have always been migrating from one place to the other since time immemorial and it certainly leaves an impact on the community around. In further paragraphs, we are going to discuss, the causes behind immigration and its repercussions.

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Out of a country health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Prevention of illness is more superior than cure, doing research look forward to delight diseases is too expensive, If inhabitance invests in a defensive method it would be more excellent, I believe that protect patients is more effective and reduceable on financial department that government held the responsibility of it and the preventive measure it strengthened the body power and shape, on the other hand, prevention has its limits.

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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advertising in modern society is ubiquitous - on the radio, TV, the internet and in our letterboxes. Some view it as a positive phenomenon while others see it as essentially negative. In my opinion, the negative influences of advertising outweigh the positive.

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more and more colleges and universities are offering courses via distance learning. distance learning have many benefits, but there are also drawbacks, as this method may not be suitable for all students. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

By the advent of the nternet, distance education has become very popular and many universities now offer different courses through it. Although there are many advantages of learning at the own place, there are some disadvantages for learners as well. I think the pros outweigh the cons and in this essay, I will discuss about it in details.

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what are the advantages and disadvantages of social media

With the advent of modern technology social media and networking is extensively being used. This has been useful in the form of knowledge and easier life style but has few drawbacks as well.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles. Others feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The true definition of leisure is fun, and as should be placed anywhere within a person's perspective of what fun is. Leisure activities can either relax you or make you burn some calories. It all depends on how you want to spend your free time.

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22. Successful sports professional can earn a great deal of money than people in other important profession. Some people think it is fully justify. Other think it is unfair. Discuss both views. Give your own opinion. Include relevant example from your own knowledge.

It is a fact that famous international sport players have extremely high salary worldwide. Some people support that they deserve high payments; while, other have a view that it is unfair for other professionals in the contemporary societies. I personally agree with the formers. The essay will discuss both views and presents my own opinion as well.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

As more and more people experience unemployment and hunger, they turn into desperate measures to survive hence the increase in crime rate.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the increase in the cost of living, parents are forced to send their children to public schools, instead of reputed private schools. Private schools boast of luxurious facilities that government schools usually lack due to limited funding. This essay will discuss why the government should not fund private schools and should instead focus on making government schools better.

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do the advantages of going abroad outweigh its disadvantages??

It is generally believed that shifting to foreign countries proves beneficial for the individuals. In my opinion, staying abroad has many advantages in terms of economy and education of children.

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