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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

The spate of crimes in recent times is alarming. There are a large number of first-time convicts perpetrating more crimes as they gain their freedom. While this is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty in finding a gainful employment, there are effective solutions to

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Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some would argue that not every offenders should be kept behind bars, and they should allow to engage with some voluntary work to help fellow people in the society. This essay completely agrees with this because criminals are a possible threat to other people in the community, and also prison provides appropriate rehabilitation for prisoners during their term.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Nowadays, our ecosystem is suffering from the atrocious effects of increasing pollution levels which has already left many hazardous effects on the human race. Solar energy has gained its popularity in everyday life in numerous nations throughout the world. This essay will delve into both its merits such as clean source of energy and economical in cost, followed by an analysis on the demerits, namely dependency on climate and consume a lot of space.

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Today , the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the modern era advertising of popular consumer goods could be a game changer as compared to real demands of the local communities in which they are sold. This essay will discuss why I partially agree with the given statement and discuss the possible reasons.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Bilingual and even multilingual people are becoming the new trend among certain demographics of society. These people believe that learning other nations’ languages can be useful for many purposes that are as essential as mind development. Others see no benefit in that except for those who plan to go overseas for work or travel. I personally disagree with this, there are many reasons for which someone should learn a language despite the extensive efforts that one has to make.

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Teens spending more time with friends than families, is it good trend?

Now a days, young adults like to spend more time with friends than with their family members. Most probable reason for this change is social media and video games. In my opinion, instead of forcing, parents should guide their kids on how to spend less time on social media and video games and show them the importance of spending time with the family at home.

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Some people think that environment problem should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss the both the sides and give your opinion

Environmental issues are the most cardinal concerns among the mankind in the current epoch as these are threatening the human existence. Therefore, some people consider that this problem need to be resolved globally while others believe that it needs to be handled individually by nations themselves. In my opinion, I reckon that, efforts are required to be incorporated from both the ends in order to initiate changes.

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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?

The revolution of the world has taken a great impact on the humans. Some people believe that many individuals spend less and less times at home. This could be due to the daily pursuit of greener pastures. This essay will be discussing the causes to this and the effects on humans and on the community.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health issues. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that people should convert into being vegetarians, as eating meat could result in major health issues. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement, as I believe that meat consists of high proteins which cannot be substituted with vegetables.

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Governments should spent money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Wether should governments allocate more of their budget to invest in railways or roadways has always been a problem of dabate. I personally think that the administration should spent a huger amount of money to build railways than roads due to two main reasons: moving by trains is more convenient and more eco-friendly.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefit does the tourism brings to individual and society?

Exploration of places is always main favourite activity carried out by many people. This tourism is considered as the source of income in many countries. Such touristry places are really an advantage to many individuals by increasing the employment alongside to the society by improving its economic status.

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More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?

It is thought that many people now keen to fast food than homemade.In my opinion,while there are some benefits of this,its demerits such as high risk of health challenges and cost of expenses are major factors to consider.

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More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people prefer fast foods rather than home-made foods. In my opinion, the demerits of having a readily prepared food such as questionable hygienic preparation and its long term effect on the health system of an individual outweighs any benefit it may bring.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems. what can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Environmental issues have been linked to activities by industrialized countries which have been hazardous to human existence.The peril of this climate change can be lessen by educating the populace and strict government policy which will benefit all.

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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Give reasons.

In today’s materialistic world, money plays an integral role in the life of the human beings. Everyone wishes to live a sophisticated life for which money is required.That is the reason that some people opine that it is appropriate to marry for money. However, others are against the "Marry for money" concept.This essay will discuss both the views before providing my verdict on this topic.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

It is common for first-time offenders to engage in criminal activities when they return from prison. This could be because of negative socialization and collaboration with hardened criminals and difficulty in getting employed after observing their jail terms.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefit does the tourism brings to individual and society?

The majority of the modern society is well attracted towards travel and adventure activities. Hence, travel and tourism sectors has now reached its peak in almost all the countries. It has a positive impact on financial and social status of the individuals and the community, it also promotes cultural exchange.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think this is good for the country, while others believe government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

Every profession has its own demand and according to the demand people get their salaries. There are professionals who earn extremely high salaries in certain countries. Some people think that it is good for the countries development. Others, however, think the government should keep a limit on the salary earned by an individual. In my opinion, the government should not bring any law that keeps a limit on amount that can be earned.

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In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree with this view

With our surplus dependence on the internet and email communication, there is no denying to the fact that the Information Technology (IT) has bloomed offlate to become one of the biggest sectors in today's world. Nonetheless, it is advocated by many that, in the times to come, it is it's darker side that will be overweighing all the goods it has offered. Likewise, In my opinion, I completely agree to this notion.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historic objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Quite a number of persons says that Art Galleries and Public Museums can be shut down, Since we can simulate these materials into Electronic Objects.In my opinion, I disagree with this statement, But agree to some extent which I would explain it in the following paragraph.

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