IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1988

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by some that the government must be responsible to facilitate the people with education free of cost at all levels. I completely agree with this statement because education is a basic right of human beings and it will enhance the literacy rate of the country.

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Both poor and the rich find the accessibility into the university difficult. Do you agree or not?

It is argued that students often struggle to take admission in the university regardless of their financial background. I completely agree with this statement because the merit of universities is relatively high than before, and they often offer a fixed number of seats per academic session to meet standards of quality education.

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Studies suggested that nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons? And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?

As per the recent studies, today's children are spending most of their time watching television than earlier times rather than engaging in various activities that are creative. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forward several solutions to motivate them to spend more time on active sports or games.

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Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it and therefore international aid should not be given to poor countries. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion.

The issue of foreign aid is often raised in modern political debate. Where is the aid money spent? Who needs it the most? In my point of view, rich countries should give financial assistance to undeveloped countries in the right way in the priority sector.

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These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quite easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages?

People nowadays can complete their assignment from home without working in an office owing to the advance in technology. Some people consider this stride can actually benefit for working remotely. From my perspective, the negative impacts of working with the technology devices, such as notebook or phone, outweigh the positive ones. The merits and demerits will be indicated regarding this pattern of working in the following essay.

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Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?

We are living in a modern world, to keep pace with the modern world different old urban areas around the globe is changing through the different process of modernization. The major advantage of this modernization process is that it makes our life more convenient, however, it has some negative effect on our natural environment.

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Some people think that renewable energy sources like solar and wind power should replace fossil fuels such as coal and gas as soon as possible. Others think we should continue to use fossil fuels while it is still cheap to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays it is generally accepted as scientific fact that fossil fuels (such as coal and gas) are harmful for the environment. This is borne out in daily life, for example many countries suffer from serious pollution, which not only reduces people’s quality of life but also creates a lot of additional problems for governments, such as the citizens’ health.

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Some people think it's more important to be informed of local/national news. Other people think that it's more important to have international views. Discuss both views and tell what you think.

In the present day and age, people are biased, while they follow the news. Although some experts assert that following local and national news is helpful, others contradict this supporting the international updates. While I stand neutral agreeing with both the views, owing to their respective benefits like being apprised about local government policies for the former, career progression for the latter.

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Some people think that children benefit from the TV and they should spend much time on it, but others support that children should not watch TV. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people supports that, the childrens are having advantages from the TV and they should watch it, but others think that childrens should not spend time on TV. There are some both pros and cons about these views. I agree that , childrens have to be know how to manage time and this essay will discuss the both sides of argument.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary world, despite the geographical boundaries, nations have become identical especially in goods and services industry. In my opinion, this trend has brought up many negative impacts, among which lose of cultural identity and traditional businesses are detriment.

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childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world.Because of this,some people think the adverts for fast food should not be allowed in schools and colleges.

In recent years,childhood obesitty has become a hazardous issue for new generations.some people recommends that,advertisments about junky food and desserts ought to be banned in academical facilities.I tottaly agree with this view and this essay wşll explore the main reasons about this issue.

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Some parents and children believe that children behaviour sould be strictly controlled. While others think children should be free ti behave Disucss both sides and give opinion

Children behaviour is often a debated topic. Many people are of the opinion that there should be a stringent check on the way, a child behave; however, others believe that children should be given a freedom to behave the way they want. In my opinion, children’s behaviour should be monitored strictly as it will be beneficial for their future.

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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

It is a very much responsibility of a government to protect their people. There are some who argue that for public safety it is justified to spend more on defense and minimize on other social and welfare funds. In my opinion, spending too much on military will not yield more security, on the contrary it will create imbalance in a country and there are chances that may not be in favor of the country.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Do the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.*

The study gap between high school and the university is a common practice in some states of the World as this time can be utilized in working or traveling. I believe that there are more advantages than disadvantages. Although lose of interest in studies due to traveling and financial stability due to working are some of the drawbacks of this ritual, benefits like exposure to the world and exploration outweigh the disadvantages.

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The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Admittedly, pursuing job from home has become much easier with internet.Although some people believe working from has negative effect on work efficiency.while other say this trend is fruitful.However I believe disadvantages of this outweight advantages.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I am writing to let you know more about my ielts study progress, that I aimed at to present: my English learning progress in the last 2 months, to test my informal writing, when it comes to a report writing. Finally this report will be a benchmark for of my English level overall, in which we will determine my strengths and weakness in English; to fill gaps and to take an effective decisions referring to your feedback, as you are my perfect English teacher whom can give me a complete feedback.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE BEST WAY TO IMPROVE PUBLIC HEALTH IS BY INCREASING THE NUMBER OF SPORTS FACILITIES. OTHERS, HOWEVER, SAY THAT THIS WOULD HAVE LITTLE EFFECT ON PUBLIC HEALTH AND THAT OTHER MEASURES ARE REQUIRED. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

There is an ongoing debate over the methods for improving public health and lifestyle. While some people believe that an increase in the sports facilities is the most effective approach, in my perspective, a nutritive diet is more essential for improving the health of people.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Vaccinations play a vital role in preventing numerous childhood diseases. Some parents believe that vaccinating their children would be beneficiary if it is mandated, and a few others argue that they shall have the right to choose to immunize their children. In my opinion, prevention is better than cure. I strongly support the fact that a law shall

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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?

After the beginning of the 'Industrial-age', men have been taking the high-position or salary all the time, where women deprived of this position. Once it is thought that, women are not capable of handling the crucial situation or they are not like men or they are unable to make a decision that is helpful. But the day has been changed, women are coming through after confronting many impediments. Moreover, the participation of women into the workforce remained unsatisfactory level, so I think the Government should encourage women to join more, to maintain equal opportunity and maintain the balanced workspace in the overall economy.

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Some people think that money is the best gift for a teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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