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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media however others believe opposite do you agree or disagree

The planet earth has been witnessed many wars and conflicts since the time of immemorial. Some believe that women leaders can reduce the number of such incidences; however, there remains some disagreement and many consider man can be the best ruler. In my opinion, I, believe that these all entirely depend on various situations of that particular time period.
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Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Offering minor currency to children to spend on their own on weekly basis is a common norm in any society across the globe. There has been opposing debate going on for a longtime conflicting the moral aspect in both the cases. In my opinion, both views carry pros and cons equally but offering money in little quantity along with proper parental guidance will do a great help to the financial knowledge of the young children.
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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

Universities, the supreme citadels for building an enlightened generation, play a pivotal role in shaping a country's destiny. Thus the curriculum these institutes follow to teach pupils has a profound impact on its overall outcome. Some scholars believe studying a wide range of subjects in tertiary level is far beneficial than restraining their studies to some particular subjects. I have reason to disagree with this view.
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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, tourism and the number of people travelling to the other countries has boomed as global trend. However, it is belived that such tourism forms cultural tensions for understanding.I completely disagree with this statement as in my opinion, international tourism generate culture learning and acceptance.
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Over population is a great concern for many under-developed countries and the government takes many steps to control the uncontrolled increase of population. In many countries, government impose rules to restrict the number of children a family can have and also restricts many facilities in case a family has too many children. But imposing a tax to restrict the number of children in a family is not a feasible solution. In my opinion, other ways of controlling the population in a country should be considered rather than imposing the tax.
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It is believed that young people are more interested in international pop singers and movie stars then in history and historical people.why is this?

It is generally seen that everyone changes their interest from time to time. Similarly, in these days young blood people fond of listening to foreign music and also watch foreign movies. However, they do not like gain knowledge about history and about freedom fighters. In my upcoming writing,I will delineate both aspects followed by my conclusion.
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Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable. Others, however, feel that it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Television has affected our lives considerably since its invention. It has created two opposite schools of thought on the ground of its serviceability. There is one who believes it to be a source of amusement and there are others who oppose this notion and consider it a waste of hours. This essay intends to discuss both the views and will reach to a subsequent conclusion why I consider the idiot box is a source of entertainment.
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Some people say it is manufactures and supermarkets responsibility to reduce the amount of packaing of products they sell and others say it us consumers responsibility to avoid buying products with too much of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is thought by certain individuals that demolishing consumption of wraping or goods protecting meterials is driven by the way of consuming the product possess by the customers and the good's sellers. How ever, an important question in relation to this is how these differences are justified. Therefore, in my opinion, imposing the price of wraping materials which consists the ingredients: plastic and polythene prior to the durability has become timely need.
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Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Giving money to students act like reinforcement for them. For students it will be a golden opportunity to earn money every time they score well in their school and hence I agree with the given idea. I feel this way because of the following reasons that I will explore in the following passage.
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the number of people are at risk at serious health problem is only because of overweight. what is the reason and how it can be solved?

At present, many nations people are suffering with health issues due to obesity. They are several reasons of this but certain preventation could slove this issue.
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Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a group of people think that to conserve native culture tourism should be prohibited in some places while some people believe that alternation is unavoidable and banned tourism will have no profit. In my opinion travel should not to forbidden since it is benefits outweigh drawbacks.
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Governments should spend money on railways rather than the roads.

There are many people who have called into question the significance of spending resources on the railways rather than roads. I would like to emphasize, I strongly agree with this opinion and will mention on some ideas even prove it with corroborated facts.
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some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programme (for example working for a charity , improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

It is true that helping the needy one is great nobel work.Many organisation like NGO's work for the poor people and provide them better quality of life. But some people believe that unpaid community services starts from younger age by making part of high school pragramme.
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Some people think that having a set retirement age of 65 years for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Pervasive, predefined retirement age of 65 years have caught a lot of eyeballs off late. Especially because certain occupations may get too taxing to carry on after a certain point in life. This has let people divided into two sections of thinkers where one of them feels that dragging along till mind-60’s is tad bit unjust. Moreover, considering the nature of the job and various health issues associated with it, benchmarking the higher age is quite harsh. Therefore, it is safe to agree to those who believe in stepping down earlier than the set age based on the occupation so that the employees can start leveraging pensions early on.
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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian rilef during natural disaster.Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that developed countries should provide humanitarian aid to unwealthy nations during natural disasters. This essay agrees with this statement because rich countries have advanced equipment and have experts to help in emergencies.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is quite a known fact that developed countries often lend their money to the poorer nations in the idea of helping their economy grow and be in-line with the global economy standards.
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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Private school system become more and more popluar in the modern world.Considering the ideal that government should support money for these specialized schools may not be necessary.
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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Economic development has been capturing a great deal of public attention in recent decades due to its ramifications on both humans’ living standards and environment. Despite its benefits of addressing poverty and hunger, economic growth could be fraught with more environmental drawbacks.
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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money and I also feel that is true. I totally agree with this thought. Let's discuss in details.
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Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While one section of people reckon that parents should reward their offsprings for behaving well, others think that children should be punished upon misconduct. However, I am of the opinion that it is a matter to be debated under the light of several factors before any reasonable conslusion can be drawn.
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