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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work. Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology.

Technology has revolutonized the work in many worplaces. It has great impact on many jobs. Though, there is some drawbacks of it.

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Eating too much of sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is the responsibility of government to limit people's sugar consumption while others think that it is an individual responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Healthy lifestyle is an important goal to achieve and maintain. it includes both healthy diet and exercises. In my opinion, Mainitaining healthy dietary habits is a responsability of both individuals and governements. Both must participiate and help.

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In some countries, older people are not respected. Why is this so. What are the consequences

In some nations today,the elderly are not given adequate respect that they deserve.This essay will explain in details the reasons for this and the possible issues this act may cause in the society.

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Some countries nowadays, older peoplate not respected. Why is this so. What can be done to resolve this.

In some nations today,the elderly are not given adequate respect that they deserve.This essay will explain in details the reasons for this and the possible issues disrespect may cause in the society.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people's skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health and society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Whitening creams have been in the beauty market for a long time and still has some drawbacks but with the right knowledge it can be more beneficial.

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Some people believe that elderly parents ought to live at senior homes. Others believe that they should live with family members(blood relatives). Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the number of people living in old age homes is rapidly increasing. It is often debated that aged parents should live in the old age homes while some believe that families should take care of the old members. I agree with the statement that elderly people should reside with their blood relatives as this will provide mental and emotional support. The essay will discuss in more detail about the advantages of elderly living with children

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Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person's decision making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In our society, advertisements are ubiquitous and people sometimes get trapped by their marketing strategies. However, although some people believe that advertising can influence on people's decision making, I side with those who feel that there is little impact on people's motivation to buy products.

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Education in prison is the best way to reduce crime as prisoners will be able to get job after leaving the prison. Do you agree or disagree

Education is an integral part of human life. Many people believe that an effective method of crime reduction is to educate the people who live in prison so that, they are able to lead a respectful life. This essay will discuss the importance of education in building a crime free nation.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the globalisation and borderless societies, people today have more chance to purchase same items all over the world that caused each countries became homogenised. However, I do not believe that people buying same products arcoss the world is a good development.

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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals because individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that governments and politicians are accountable for environmental preservation, not citizens because citizens do little. From my perspective, I disagree with the viewpoint.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We often hear of an escalating trend in children leading to feeble lifestyles in media. Although many believe that both parents and educational institutes share equal responsibility in addressing this growing problem, I disagree and feel that it is the utmost responsibility of the parents to change the unhealthy etiquette of adolescents.

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Working is taking a more important role in people's lives. Why are people working so much? Do you think this trend is good or bad?

In modern times, people are spending their majority of time in working in order to obtain wealth. Therefore, people strive for working unremittingly no matter the result is benefit or not. In this essay, I will offer the underlying reason for working unremitting and give the opinion why this trend could be negative to people.

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Some people believe teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit the teenagers and the community as well. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Share personal examples if applicable.

Volunteerism is the practice of providing service without monetary compensation. It is argued that adolescents should be required to engage in volunteer community work in their free time. The advantages this arrangement brings to both teenagers and the communities they come from will be shown in this essay. For one, teenaged community workers gain life experience that could be helpful to their development as empathetic individuals. For example, as a high school student I once washed and folded bedding for a non-profit group that provided housing to the homeless in Ottawa. This philanthropic endeavor helped instill in me an understanding of the challenges other people face in their day to day lives. As my experience shows, humbling volunteer work should be made mandatory to help youths recognize and respect people from other walks of life. In addition to being beneficial to young people, adolescents who engage in community service provide valuable work fo...

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

The pictures are accompanied in most of the TV and newspapers to present new stories very frequently. Recently there are different opinion carried, some people say pictures are more effective and another set of people has different view that words will have more impact and effect. In my opinion, usage of words will have more emphasis on readers and viewers rather than pictures.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?"

Nowadays, there is a growing trend for students to relocate abroad to continue their education despite numerous obstacles. In my opinion, i believe that the advantages in terms of exposure and job opportunities makes it stronger than any disadvantages it might have.

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Children are experiencing the increasing educational, social and commercial pressure. What are the cause? What means do you think can be taken to reduce them?

Children are under tremendous pressure of education, community and finance. This phenomenon can stem from many causes, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advancement in technology and invention of electronic gadgets such as smartphones, tablets and laptops offer plethora of benefits to each category of the society. Due to which, some people tend to watch movies on these gadgets. However, there are certain demographics of the society who believe that theatres are appropriate place to watch movies by considering contemporary features that theatres offer. This essay will analyse both viewpoints to present an opinion in a plausible way.

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

The government around the globe focus more on developing the economy of their respective nation rather than considering to fulfill the needs of common people. I believe that authorities have to change their attention to work for laymen, and benefits and drawbacks of the statement will be discussed in forthcoming paragraphs.

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News about problems and emergencies is harmful to individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that in this contemporary world news has become an indispensable part of our life because due to news we can easily connect with outside world’s issues or problems. But some people think that news of emergency like natural calamity or financial instability has adverse effects on people and society. However, personally I believe that news has more merits than de-merits. In the following paragraphs, I put forth my views to bolster my opinion.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Between finishing high school and starting university, the students are encouraged to work or travel for a year in some countries. There are advantages and disadvantages as well.

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