IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2093

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast foods will solve this problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

An increasing number of individuals are obese.It is considered by some that inflating the price of junk foods will effectively deal with this issue .I totally agree that increment in the cost of foods with high fat content will not only dissuade people from eating it,but also compel owners of restaurants to diversify and adjust their menu.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Social integration is a crucial factor needed for everyone in the path of being well accepted in human society as an individual as well as a member in a group. Recently, there has been a serious concern among a vast number of people whether children should be home-schooled or educated at school in order to become good members in society. In the essay, both views will be discussed and my personal opinion will be present as well.

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•The television is good for you. •Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching television.

There has been a debate regarding the benefits and drawbacks of televisions for countless years. Although the tv has many non-beneficial characteristics, it is very hard to imagine a modern world without its existence. Hence, this essay discusses how televisions are both advantageous and disastrous for the society.

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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People have different views related whether it benefical for the children to immigrate with their families abroad. I believe it is beneficial for children to move outhside their country.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, state authorities should levy high taxes on fast food companies due to, many people are facing health related problems due to excessive consumption of fast food.I agree with this idea because money is the only factor can influence any situation.After implementing huge excise on this food centers. As a result, there would be increased menu prices which will have to bear by the customers and some other small fast food corners will get wind up.

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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience

Preparing food has been an important part of the daily routine in most cultures. Recently, advances made in information technology, social networking and refrigeration have made it easier and quicker to prepare food. This has led to an improved productivity of people, mostly women, and also provided access to various types of cuisines and their recipe.In this essay, we will analyze some of these reasons and their impact on the lives of the people.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the current scenario, how children should spend their free time has sparked much debate whether they should take part in the group activities or they should learn to keep themselves busy on their own. I shall discuss both the views in this essay and thus give my opinion.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Computers are very popular in those days, people love to use computer for so many different things like learning, entertainment. Nowadays many people think that computer are teach in a classroom and children are able to use computer for learning purpose. However, other think that dependence on computer may have a certain kind of risk but according to my opinion school should provide computer for children to learning purpose.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often said that people working in entertainment are paid so much money. Many people believe that entartainers should gain this vary amount of money. Others, however, think that there are many important profession worth to be paid like entertainers or even more. While this point of view has value, I believe that paying this giant number is kind of exaggarated.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, it is a matter of dispute among masses that whether Government should invest more on railways or on roads. Some people believe that Government should spend more money on railways, while there are others who are of the opinion that most of the money should be spent on roads. This essays will discuss that why Government should spend more on railways.

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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

There exists a hypothesis that consuming local food can save cost and environment, although I do not negate these advantages, in fact, it is not supposed to be effective and rational. This theory cannot be implemented in many regions and limit the development of culture as well as economics.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the arts are just as valid as the other subjects, especially for primary school children. This essay agrees with that statement and will first discuss how some students flourish when studying music, art or drama and then talk about how maths and science are not crucial at primary level.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In modern life, we can see that technology has changed the way many people connect to each other so much. Technology has changed not only communication but also making relationships in many ways. In my opinion, this has become both a positive and negative development.

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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the invention of the internet and world wide web, come the new spaces for people to socialise such as social networks and chatrooms. Some people believe that these technologies allow them to befriend more people. The other argue that relationships should be established via real world interaction.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A language serves as a medium to communicate and converse that is vitally important as of other important needs. Some people believe that speaking of a foreign language in a foreign country can be troublesome and can seriously affect the socializing and where we need to transfer our information. To invalidate this believe we shall be discussing why inhabiting a country where you will have to commute in its native language wouldn't be a problem.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought by some that people have inherent abilities for certain activities such as sports and music, others consider that any child can develop these talents. Personally, I think these claims are both true due to my experiences in life.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as housing and food. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Natural disaster has left many people homeless and hungry. I believe rich countries ought to accept and cater for refugees, so as to reduce mortality rate, and help them fulfil their dreams in life.

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Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

Language is the only thing which made humans different from other different creators. English is one such language responsible for communicating people from different geographical locations. Even though learning English language does not mean that we can avoid studying local languages. Seeking local languages is as important as foreign languages.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever course they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The confusion about the course to study in the tertiary institution still remains one puzzle yet to be unraveled. While some sets of people think that undergraduates should be allowed to study the course of their choice others think they should not. In my opinion, i believe that learners should be allowed to take the path of knowledge they want in school. This essay will discuss both views and give a reasoned conclusion.

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Without capital punishment (death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of more violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.

It is argued that, the death penalty is needed to eradicate crime from the society. As there is no safety for one’s live and the number of brutal murders are incrasing. In my opinion, I agree with the idea of harsh punishment of death because it creates a sense of fear in the mind of a criminal and at the same time state authorities should work on the permanent solution for these crimes.

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