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IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, rules apply to children's behaviour to enhance their personality. While in some countries kids are surrounded by strict rules towards their behaviour, there are still some who are lenient. In this essay, I will discuss to what extent a child should be under the regulation.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many youngsters are urged to take a year off to work or study before they start tertiary studies. This essay will illustrate both the benefits and drawbacks of taking a gap year.

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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There are many significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education for almost countries around the world, and Vietnam is not the exception.

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In recent years, many small shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping Is this a positive or a negative development?

Shopping is the best part which is cherished by females the most. As these days there is growing number of malls opening at a rapid pace which is very much lucrative to the customer's. On the other hand, small shops located in isolated places are suffering to the customers who prefer more going to malls. In my opinion, it's a positive development overall.

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The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons and what are the impacts?

The culture of getting together at home, be it a lunch, dinner or breakfast is vanishing at a fast pace. It is barely evident that people belonging to a family brunch or dine together in this modern world. In my opinion, fast moving and self-centred busy lives of individuals, and minimal or no knowledge and emphasis on the importance of such get together practices are primary reasons for such fall outs which may result in serious issues such as no empathy or communication among the family members, obliteration of customs and associated problems.

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Most modern families have both parents working and as a result, children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

An increasing number of contemporary families consist of parents who are both working, which leads to them spending very little time with their children. The prominent reasons for a rise in such a culture can be attributed to the advent of globalization and an increased cost of living.

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There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent years, the number of students enrolling in the universities is on the rise. Some people believe that this growth has a positive effect on the society while others think that it may reduce the quality of education in the universities. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a huge number of students at university.

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, the majority of youngsters are relocating in cities to study or pursue a lucrative career. While I admit that such trend does have many positives, it does has few negatives as well. Hence, this essay will elucidate the positive and negative aspects of it, and shall discuss the main reasons why this is happening.

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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is irrefutable that people follow the latest fashion and choose their clothes as well as hair styles according to the modern fashion, in many nations in the would. However, this essay will discuss about the causes of this trend in the first paragraph and according to me it is a negative development.

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Some people believe that teaching ethics to children is responsibility of teachers. Others say that this responsibility lies with parents. Discuss both these views and give you own view.

Cultivating moral values in children is a daunting task for both mentors and parents. It is often argued by some that teachers are solely responsible for teaching good ethics to children because they spend the most part of their day at school. Meanwhile, others still claim that parents should shoulder this responsibility as children imbibe behaviour from parents. This essay will explore both sides of the argument before reaching a logical opinion.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their own countries. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to change negative attitudes?

Some would say international tourism is not beneficial for the host country. The reason would be a cultural difference, and the probable solution would be, to guide the visitor about the culture.

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Walking is known to be beneficial for health, yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to address this problem?

Although walking possesses significant beneficial impact on health, few people adopt this activity. The lack of time and laziness are the main reason of not doing this activity. This issue can be curbed by creating awareness among masses and rewarding them to motivate for such activities.

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Levels of young crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

The world large cities are experiencing a dramatic surge of offensive crimes committed mainly by young people.I believe, that there are certain reasons behind that.The growing number of unemployment, lack of education and the availability of addictive drugs, all lie behind these gloomy figures.

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Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is widely argued that government should impose a strict law to prevent noise pollution becoming a means of disruption to other people. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a strict law against noise pollution.

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Some people believe that the most important qualities of an effective teacher are understanding and empathy. Others believe that it is more important for teachers to be rigorous and demanding in their expectations for students. Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Teachers play very phenomenal role in the present competitive academic system. And being impactful positively is a two-edge sword kind of an approach. Some people argue that these education instructors should be accommodating towards the students. Where as in the other's opinion, being tough and directive is the only way to be an effective educator. In my conviction, a teacher should be flexible by being able to understand the student's needs and come up with a custom approach suitable to the student's need.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

Nowadays, the amount of crimes committed by young people are growing continuously all around the world. This essay will discuss the main reasons of this issue and then describe the possible solution of the problem.

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Number of people who are at high risk due to overweight.what is the reason?

It is a bitter truth that lots of people are suffering from the serious diseases like high blood pressure, obesity due to overweight. There are myriad reasons behind this deplorable condition. I will discuss some of them in the following paragraph and try to give some solution as well.

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Write about the following topic: - Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. - Why is this? - What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To begin with, solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world, and this is due to the fact that solar power it’s a renewable source and its usage is increasing steeply. Besides, we are trying to substitute the non-renewable energies all around the world in order to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions. In this essay, it will be presented the pros and the cons, and this is going to be analysed closely.

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Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or a negative development?*

The internet is used by many people to find a solution to medical diseases. In my opinion, it is a positive development because it not only gives an alternative to physical exercise for serious problems but also helps in curing minor diseases.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Teenage is the most vulnerable age for not only the positive and but also the negative thoughts to incur. Recent criminal records from different countries show the rise in crime rate among teenagers. Teenagers with less guidance are easily dragged into these crimes.

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