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IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In some countries, celebrities can earn more money than senior politicians. What might be the reason for this? Is this positive or negative development?

Today people can earn a salary in different ways somebody can be a very popular singer or actor. However, others can make payment by protecting our life and so on. Unfortunately, in some countries, superstars can earn more salary than doctors and politicians.

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Nowadays shopping has become a new favourite pastime for young people. What are the reasons for this? should they be encouraged to develop other hobbies?

With the advancement of technology, people now have a lot of choices to choose as hobbies. Currently, the trend of shopping as a leisure time activity has become very popular in teenagers. I think adopting shopping as a hobby doesn't have any bad consequences on the young generation. Also, the main reasons behind this uprising trend will be discussed in this essay.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

In this modern era, people tend to follow trendy lifestyle even if it cost their financial security and health issues. Drinking high caloric-drinks that are carbonated is on the rise among individuals, especially the young generation. I believe that every community can establish ways together with government to bring social awareness regarding this matter.

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Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option.

Some people recklessly use the water which is available to humankind. One the other hand, some believe that freshwater is an extremely limited resource which should be used in a controlled manner and the government should take the necessary measures in order to preserve the water resources for the future.

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Would you like to live a long, calm life until 100 years old or would you prefer a shorter life but much more intense. Decide and explain your reasons.

If I was asked about the life expectancy, preferring having a 100-year and calm life or having a shorter lifespan but much more fatigue, frankly, I would rather take the first one, having a long life and living as cool as a cucumber as there are two main reasons corresponding to family and individual.

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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Commonly, in European countries, teenagers are sent to schools that help them to develop practical skills in order to be better prepared for the job market. Other children are enrolled in schools that focus on more general subjects. In my opinion, schools should develop a structure to develop practical abilities in students not only because it could prepare them earlier to access a good job position but also because this could help them to decide the best careeer to pursue.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Discuss both views

The use of social- networking sites has been so popular these days among all walks of life. There are some people who think that the trend of sharing private information would bring some repercussions to society. However, in my opinion, I completely disagree with this view as the merits of this is huge.

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?

Over workload adversely impact their physical and mental health. So employers should recognize the target should be realistic as most of the time, unrealistic deadlines make the employees feel under pressure. So to tackle this kind of issue they should make sure the targets must be challenging but realistic. But in a similar way, insufficient workload makes them feel their skills are underused. Secondly, the lack of interpersonal support or poor working relationships leads to a sense of isolation.

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All over the world , societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, obesity has become a really serious problem, that could lead to a huge amount of work that many people currently have and therefore, a lack of free time. In this essay,I will further discuss the reasons that obesity is bringing and also how we could tackle this awful problem.

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Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this? Would you consider doing this yourself and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

The search for a good education has led students from underdeveloped countries to travel far away from their hometowns. The motivation for those students to move to 'first-world' countries such as the USA and UK is to enrol in renowned colleges with a higher degree of education. As an international student myself, I not only consider travelling abroad for education but I would also recommend it because students can have a better education and more opportunities in life.

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

As more and more organizations and institutes establish themselves in cities, talent from rural areas is drawn towards it. While this 'Brain Drain' does negatively impact the development of non-metropolitan regions, it's advantages towards the economy of a nation are far more pronounced.

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Some people think that government should give high salary to the celebrities but others think that it should be provided to doctors and teachers discuss both views and give ur views

It has become the moot issue whether the regime should be paid handsome remuneration to the famous personalities or it should be given to social workers such as doctors and teachers. However, distinct masses have a distinctive mindset. I accord myself to the later statement that medical personnel and professors deserved the enormous amount considering their respective work. The upcoming paragraphs will shed the lights on both views.

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Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world’s major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem, and suggest some solutions.

As cities continue to grow, especially in developing countries, their streets are becoming increasingly congested. While in many cases the situation is so severe that transit often grinds to a halt, there are some measures that can be taken to try to address this issue.

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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both views.

Media is an inevitable part of this modern society. That the famous personalities should not be followed by the media to click their photographs anywhere to made them viral which might create privacy concerns is a subject which provokes both stark opposition and great enthusiasm, and at times both become somewhat blurred. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate. I will discuss these factors in upcoming paragraphs along with my view.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reason for this rise in obesity, How could it be tickled?

Obesity has become a global crisis and it is rising and affecting all the age groups. The major culprit for this problem is the overconsumption of unhealthy food and I think it can be resolved by increasing taxes for food and beverages.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Parenting has become a challenge these days as there is an increasing number of fathers who have become homemakers rather than acting as the customary breadwinner, which is now played by mothers. Financial difficulty is the foremost reason for this gender role reversals in rearing a family and in my opinion, this is a negative development.

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before.Whatarethereasons?Whatcanemployersdotomaketheirlifeeasier?

There is a worrying trend that these days individuals work hard for a longer span every day and which effected their mental peace, and they feel under pressure.It is a trend ascribed in a number of reasons and must be addressed to a definite solution.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are a lot of people who believe that having abundant funds are the only way to live a prosperous and happy life. According to me, this belief is so deeply entreched in their mind because a lot of cash enables them to buy physical goods, which makes them feel elated, nevertheless, an alternative option for staying happy is to have a higher sense of purpose.

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Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your personal knowledge or experience.

Most of the individuals dream about having a bright professional and joyful family life together. But, there are several issues in managing both career and family. Although, it does not mean that these difficulties do not have any solution. In the following paragraphs, I am going to describe the problems and their remedies.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today the trend of online study is way more popular than ever. Now, we have seen that there is an urge in the educational institutes which provide various study material online. This topic is debatable. In this essay we will discuss the various good aspects of this issue and why it may be bad on some fronts which we need to consider.

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