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IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

It is undoubtedly clear that every crime has to be punished and there are varying opinions on the method of punishments to be given for each felony. A good number of people believe that the ultimate penalty of death is the best option for heinous offence and they do even believe that this sentencing can prevent such actions. Some others believe in lifetime sentencing for atrocities. In this essay, I intend to delve into both the views on this heated topic.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

This trend in several nations over the globe is popular for juveniles to stop living with their families. They decide to stat living independently or with their friends. From my perspective, this is a negative shift, since it makes the young to live under certain risks and put them away from the love of a mother or father.

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Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?

It is true that most high school graduates struggle with their financial management. There are a number of reasons behind this tendency and several solutions should be adopted by the government and individuals to improve the situation.

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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Due to innovation and modern technology, a current news can easily access through television and internet. One of the heated debates nowadays, is that weather the journalists are true or not to their responsibilities and ethics. Some people believe, that they are providing the factual information, while other commenters disagree with the latter view. The writer, believe that not all journalists are true to their responsibilities and ethics, the reasons will discuss below, followed by a conclusion.

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Most Modern Families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

Nowadays, affording standard of living has become crucial to many people, hence more couples are into working. While most liberal families, parents at work, which results In no free time for them to spend with their children. In this essay, I will discuss why this is happening and what issues it can develop among them.

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Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently, many cities around the world are facing a rapid increase in the number of shortages in accommodation. This essay will discuss the two main reasons for the scarcity of houses which includes, increased rural-urban migration and Increased population growth. This essay will also suggest solutions to counter these problems which includes, increasing job availabilities in rural areas and building adequate housing systems in towns surrounding the city.

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In many countries people of all ages do sports and exercises a lot. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvanatges? Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience and knowledge.

In several nations, individuals prefer to do rigorous physical activities and sports. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantage of a lot of exercises and further, will agree that the advantages of doing exercise and sports activities outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company. why might be this case? what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed? give your reasons for answer

Many people aspire to start their own business instead of working in a captive environment. The foremost reason for this preference is the, liberty, which people get by working independently. Although this gives the impression to have benefits, but, it has his own drawbacks.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

Nowadays, people are paying attention about all related to skin care. In some countries exist a rentable business that sells popular whiten creams. People use them because of the skin's spots and other problems that the skin usually presents. However, this product can bring side effects if we do not buy a certificated brand.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

In this day and age, a lot of people are suffering from the serious diseases like cardiovascular disease or hypertension due to being overweight. There are some reasons behind this. And I will discuss some of them in the following paragraph and try to give some solution as well.

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Some business observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seem to lack interpersonal skills needed for communicaion with their colleagues. What could be the reason for this? What solution can help address this problem?

As a human being, we live in a society. We need to communicate with each other to full fill our own needs. Business is the term which is created and developed in society to help us to fill our desires, requires higher connection and networking between the member of the society. But it is true that, the staff who just graduated from the academy or college, have lacked in their interpersonal contact skills. There are so many factors behind this situation.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

It is believed by a few people that it is unjust for the animals if they are kept in captivity while others believe that it can prove beneficial both for animals and men. In my opinion, animals should never be kept in zoo as it is a huge animal rights violations.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Generally, in the past, after graduating from high school, students usually have already chosen for them an ideal educational institution. Then, they studied right away. But nowadays, an increasing number of students are concerned about taking a year off and exploring other options.

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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of the debate, and reach your own conclusion.

Now a day we can see in many public places, a poster or sign of "no tobacco/no smoking" is put up. Some countries feel that it is important to have laws against smoking in public places like restaurant, movie theatres, etc., On contrary to this many thinks that it is not needed. In this essay I would discuss both sides and conclude with my opinions.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, demand of people is increasing significantly, which can be the essential goods or unnecessary for them. Thus, some people spend their money too much than they should be for consuming things which they favour. This essay discusses the causes and the possible solution to solve it.

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In some cultures elderly people are highly valued, while in some cultures youth are more valued . Discuss both views

It is a debatable issue whether the later years of growth are more valuable or the young life. In my opinion, since youth is a period for attaining goals, I consider it to be a more precious stage in an individual's growth.

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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that homeschooling is a better option.Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

Nowadays, people are living in a cut-throat competitive world. So, mankind must be proactive about their future goals. Education is an indispensable aspect to become a renowned personality. Due to that, a few insist that their children should study in best institutes so that they learn to socialize with others and can develop other skills. Nevertheless, others argue that homeschooling is optimum. In my perception, I agree with the first point. Though, the essay will focus on both the sides and will reflect my opinion before coming to the conclusion.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many educational institutions teach courses online and encourage people to study over internet. In my opinion, this is a positive aspect as it makes the education not only affordable to many students but also good for the environment.

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Cycling is heathier and environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

Nowadays, cycling is less and less common although it helps us to keep in shape and is good for the environment. There are some reasons explain why it becomes so unpopular and solutions to increase cycling use.

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To what extent has internet made life more convenient? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern age, there is not a shadow of doubt; one of the most significant concerns of mankind is having a suitable life. A group believes that the internet plays an influential decisive role in this regard, while others argue that it also has some negative impact. I believe that this technology has both advantages as well as some severe drawbacks, as discussed below.

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