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IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, particularly in rich countries, many children have been appearing with much fatness due to following an unhealthy food plan, lack of exercises and other health problems. In this essay, we will look at the causes and effects of obesity and how they have been affected by over-weight with some relevant examples.

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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

Nowadays, the graph of offences raising gradually, most commonly it is increasing in the youth of our world within metro cities. There are several issues and measures regarding this topic which will be elaborated further with relevant examples.

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The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

It is certainly true that mealtime with family is disappearing. This essay will put forward some explanations for this trend and an analysis of the impacts.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Discoveries in today's world by scientists and explorers have opened gateways to a new world. The Internet is one of the key to connect the world which make people wanderers. Tourists make videos and publish them over the internet which urges more people to see it by themselves. Due to many developments and scientific equipments in unexplored areas like Amazon has become approachable.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

As a matter of fact, that changing in the style of shopping has occupied a significant number of people’s interest and discussions. It is a reason for a considerable statics of issues. No one can deny that, travelling of people to large malls and centres needs a sincere effort and precise thinking of the owners of local shops, people, and the government, in order to face the drawbacks of such issue and find the appropriate solution for that negative improvement.

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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Never before have we experienced the substantial contributions of the Internet to our modern lives. In fact, since its emergence, human lives have been claimed to be much improved, particularly in both social and educational aspects. With a view to highlighting its significance in these two fields, some notable benefits are to be put under critical discussion.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In this 21st century, the modernised world believes in the concept of "Everything under one roof".

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing? Give some reasons and solutions for it.

In this face-paced world, obesity is considered as a cause which led to health problems. In my opinion, there are several reasons of this issue, and I will offer some solutions to tackle these problems.

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages

It is true that young generation prefers to settle in big cities rather than living in their hometown. There are a variety of reasons to explain this problem, in my opinion, these are outweighed by the drawbacks of this trend.

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Today, more and more tourusts are visiting where conditions are different, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

The tourism industry is growing day by day. These days, tourists prefer to explore those places, which they have not experienced or seen before. In this essay, merits and demerits of visiting such places will be discussed.

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International travel sometimes makes people prejudiced rather than broad minded. What may be the reasons for this? What can people do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?

The communications between the diverse countries are more convenient than before.The globalization makes it easier for travellers to brand their eyes on other countries.However, due to the misunderstanding of exotic cultures, many visitors have a bias on the foreign countries they have visited.Then I will develop my views on why the prejudice make and how to improve the respect on exotic cultures.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both sides.

It is often debated how much freedom children should have. Although some people believe that the activities of children should be monitored closely by parents, others oppose this viewpoint. I, however, believe that parental supervision is only necessary until they are mature.

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The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

Nowadays, it is a common fact that many people don't eat their meals with their families. There could be several reasons for this trend and some influences.

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Should International news be kept as a subject in secondary school. Discuss both sides.

The world globalization continues be one of the most important processes during our times. Countries have been tighted together more and this trend leads to the Importance of International news. Personally, I believe that Global news should be taught in secondary school, because this subject would represent the whole world to children from different prospectives and it would develop children's critical thinking.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

It is now a known fact that buying things is the new addiction of our century. Some people, in fact, take tons of credits from the bank to buy anything they want, whether it's a need or not, until they find themselves in debt. I will be explaining why this behaviour occurs in the first place and suggesting an advice with the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, men and women are having children at later age than in the past. What are the reasons for this development ? Do advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

As is known, these days, most of the couples decide to have babies at later ages than in the past. It has been utterly debated that having children at over 25, 26 and later can lead to some problems. As far as I am concerned, this tendency brings about more upsides than downsides.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view.

Zoos continue to be controversial, even now that they have evolved into ‘animal parks’ or similar facilities. Most people love animals, and there are strong views on both sides, which I will discuss now.

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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it is a common aspiration that people prefer to start their own business rather than work for a company or an organization. Personally speaking, I would say this tendency has both benefits and drawbacks, but I believe the advantages of running a company outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

In the modern era, globalization has become an essential part of everyday life. It is often said by some that learning another language is only because of travelling or working, however, others claim that there are more reasons why people ought to learn a second language. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and express my support for the latter view.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, rules apply to children's behaviour to enhance their personality. While in some countries kids are surrounded by strict rules towards their behaviour, there are still some who are lenient. In this essay, I will discuss to what extent a child should be under the regulation.

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