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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think art such as sculpture and music cannot improve the quality of people’s lives so the government should not spend money on them but on health and defence. What is your opinion?

Art is a fundamental part of society and should be funded as it enriches lives through beautiful and thought provoking ideas. Art represents ideas and objects in new and interesting ways that allow people to think more deeply about the world and appreciate the delicacy. In addition, Arts funding represents a small fraction of the amount of money spent by governments and does not significantly impact the amount of taxes that need to be collected. In this essay, the value of funding the Arts will be discussed.

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The Government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public service instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

Many people believe that the government funds can be utilized for the public service, rather than developing theatres to promote art and music. Although I agree that it is important to invest in public services, but funding in the cultural sector is also crucial for the society.

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In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?

Happiness comes from healthiness. A person who chooses to live in an unhealthy manner they surely get a disease. Better health is a significant approach in daily lives. Individuals who are not concerned about physical & mental stability are defining their pointless behaviour. Why are they doing this, I will persuade it in successive paragraphs.

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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

There are arguments that traditional course books in schools are threatened to be replaced by the internet. While some people predict that this will never happen, in this essay I will give my reasons for why I completely disagree with this prediction.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the present epoch, the world is confronting the health issues because of the consequences of consuming too much junk food. So, some people suppose that it is mandatory to apply a large text on this degree of cuisine. I partly agree with the statement, but this is not only the complete solution. In addition, a nutrition department should aware the public and it become also the part of children education.

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Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

In our modern society, the trend of getting married and having kids at the age of 30, as opposed to when at a younger age has become a matter of discussion for many. In my opinion, the negative aspects of this tendency overshadow the positive points. In this essay, I shall critically examine the given topic and outline relevant examples to support my view.

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These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Today, a lot of people prefer to protect their health by believe in physicians and medicine than by observance to the healthy style of life. They may not manage this system, or they think our health should be kept by doctors. I totally agree with this statement and I will explain my agreement with relevant examples in this essay.

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some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important discuss both these view and give your opinion.

Students study different subjects for enhancing their knowledge in school. Some people have various ideas about what subjects are essential for students to study in school. Some people stick to the point that, studying historical events is one of the most significant subjects. However, I personally believe studying and learning science and technology is more important.

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We must be the change we wish to see in the world! --M.K. Gandhi Write an essay of at least 250 words about the following questions: What does this statement that Mahatma Gandhi often repeated mean? How have you adopted this statement in your life or how would like to? Or do you think this statement is unimportant?

If you want innovation in the world, you must start the revolution by yourself. But what is the real meaning of the statement? In this essay, I will write about my opinion on this statement.

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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary school such as reading, writing and math. How far do you agree or disagree?

Utilizing computers can create creative children at the early age. There is an inextricable link between computers and brain. For example, you should use your brain to solve a problem when you work with a software in a computer. This can lead to an active brain. Since children at an early age, those who are in elementary school, has a fresh mind in comparison with other children their brain has more capacity to analysis data and work with computers. This is likely to create a powerful brain and enables those children to think outside the box.

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Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals, others think that is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion

People have different views on factors which effect the happiness. In my opinion, an individual can stay happy irrespective of the obstacles in life.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

At the present period of time, advance of technology enables numerous opportunities, so makes easy working from home for many people. I think, despite the fact that, this has a lot of advantages for either employer or employees, the disadvantages shouldn’t be neglected.

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: Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The importance and popularity of class performance in school have grown over the past few years due to a higher competitive environment. Experts throughout developing and developed worlds have debated whether giving the reward to the student that is best in the class or only score improvement is more important. Both sides of this issue will be examined in the following essay.

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Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

Most of the people in the world have a dream about to live in a perfect society and lead happy and meaningful life. In spite of this, the thoughts about what the ideal society would be like are not the same.

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Some parents put too much pressure on their children. To what extent do you agree?

The younger generation is the future of every country around the world. The amount of pressure parents put on their kids has been a debatable topic for years. Some commentators believe that putting too much pressure helps children to succeed better in life, whereas others believe it could hamper a child’s upbringing. In my opinion, a moderate amount of pressure could be helpful in motivating and keeping children on track.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

From the ancient period, music plays a vital role in human life and these days, with high technology, it rapidly develops in various types, bringing to the public as plenty as functions, helping communities are connected and close the gap between individual all around the world, while others do not think so. In my viewpoint, I partly agree with some benefits that music makes for people and I will discuss both sides in this essay.

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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When we were child, the museum was the delighted place to visit with our parents and friends, and at that time entry fee was free. Nowadays, due to financial scenario, most of them charge a fee to enter, even in art galleries. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reason's why they are having the ticket fee wich have more pro's than con's and give example to those.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days, with the high development of technology, everything is growing faster, and this leads to the fact that the public believes the appearance of libraries in life is less necessary than in the past and they are a wasteful use of the government budget. Instead of the replacement of computers or smart devices which are connected with Wifi and 3G but others think that paper books should be saved not only by society but also by the government. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my viewpoint.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the majority of people choose renting a home more than buying it. While this choice has positive impacts, it has also some drawbacks.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a wast of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement.

Spending our free time is the most important one in our life successful people will spend in a good way. Although, many people believe that investing in music and theatre are a waste of money. I agree with this statement to a large extend for some reason. My position is argued further with the explanation.

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