You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter - Explain how you heard about the job - Describe the kind of job you would like to have - Give details of your experience and qualifications Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter about open vacancies in your store.I have a keen interest in some jobs.I fulfil
requirements
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of the posts,Which are open?
To begin
with,Yesterday,I was watching the TV .That time,I saw
advertisement
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an advertisement
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about jobs which are open in your department and from the
last
night,I was so excited.Because I want to do the job in your store as an assistant manager.
Moreover
,I select
this
office.Because
,
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this
is a professional position and my friend
also
doing a spot in your department
and
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he always
praise
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about
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your team.I would like to become an assistant manager.Because I have skills related to
this
work.It is a white colour profession.Your association is not so far from my home. It will be easy for me to go for a job.Because I can save my time.
Apart from
this
,I have a degree in business management and
also
have 5 years
experience
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in
this
arena.Nowadays,I am working in the same position in a multinational association.But,I want to leave that group.Because I had to live away from my house.So,I want to live with my family.That's why,I am applying for
this
position in your team. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you Yours faithfully, Gagandeep Kaur
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Job advertisement
  • Job opening
  • Department store
  • Position
  • Duties
  • Qualifications
  • Experience
  • Skills
  • Customer service
  • Teamwork
  • Responsibility
  • Retail industry
  • Previous employment
  • References
  • Resume/CV
  • Cover letter
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