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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

lately i have been thinking a lot about what the people expect of me. I never had thought about that but, since the start of the school holidays, this theme keep coming back to my mind. Last month my family sing me up in two different exams... i think i might be fail. my friends ( and their family's) continue to say phrases like '' shes so responsibly for her age'' '' shes so clever'' and this just make me fell worst. I know it is trivial, but was the only thing who come to my mind to write.
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Some people think children can learn more efficiently by watching tv.Therefore, children should be encouraged watch tv at home and school.

In this modern era,our lifestyle is altered by technology in all aspects,childhood is not an exception .Therefore,a section of pupils believes that the usage of television will the learning process more efficient among students.The essay will support the above-mentioned statement strongly. In the following paragraphs,I will explain how watching tv reduces the boredom of studies with its colour effects.
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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skill and ways of life die out.

Nowadays technology has become a part of human beings ,technology provides us many things those are very useful for us like, aeroplane ,train, cars,etc.lotbof people's are forgotten there culture because they things update yourself according time.
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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out.it is pointless to try and keep themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

Nowadays technology has become a part of human beings ,technology provides us with many things that are very useful for us apply aeroplanes ,trains, cars,etc.lot of people are forgotten their culture because they things update themselves according time.
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You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apologize for early, which will happen on 30th May. This day matches with next Saturday. On 30th may I will celebrate mine graduate party it with my friends from the university and invented them to my house.This will the firs time I will celebrating with my friends. I early sorry for you concern.I will planing to end the party until at 10 p.m and continue in restourant. Dear neighbor want you call in cafe and discuss for damage caused. Next time i have a social gatherning I will not cause any inconvenience for the neighbors i will invite fewer people. Please accept my apologize once again Your faithfully, Al Capone
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You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.

I am writing to you to apologise about a graduation party which is will be tomorrow.
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Bullying behaviour has become a major problem at schools. What are the causes and solutions to this problem?

It is important to solve the bullying problem as it is a serious and very common problem nowadays.
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Some people believe that development of computer has changed the human lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world of advanced development, whether in the technology, infrastructure or health sector. Moreover, these factors play a prominent role in human life. Although, some people argue that the invention of computer technology has many drastic impacts on human life. I will illustrate my reasons for agreeing in the following paragraphs.
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3.Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's era of advanced development, which is whether in the technology sector, infrastructure, or health system. Therefore, these factors play a prominent role in surged growth of the human population. Moreover, it leads to deforestation to provide enough space for humankind to live. I will illustrate my reasons for agreeing with this statement in the following statement .
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The rote learning of information by memorisation plays the most important role in educating people. do you agree with this opinion?

In today's competitive era, students are seen as robots that can process all the knowledge without facing failure and perform well in exams. Nowadays, the country's education system plays a prominent role in the birth of a trend where they are focusing on the rote learning method instead of teaching students practical learning. I will illustrate my reasons for disagreement on this statement in the following paragraphs.
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In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people stored knowledge on the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's hi-tech world, the internet and technology made human life much more convenient and relaxed. Nowadays, in the era of social media, a person is a touch away to acquire knowledge, whereas, in the earliest time, humans used to preserve their valuable knowledge in books. I will illustrate the pros and cons of this statement and explain my opinion.
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In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree

The concept of arts contains lots of ilusional perspective, the more people think of catching the artist ideal the higher chance for them to lost. Since "anyone can do it" became a phenominum, genuine talent are underated and suffering under criticism, whileas people with no talent get more attention and spotlight. However, to take the statement to considered, I totally disagree.
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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.

I am writing to you for complaint about problems which i faced in our room, which is became cause for decreasing productivities about my study.
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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.

As everyone knows, science has invented many things, that was very useful for human beings. Mostly, people decided to do works and study in another country. They can travel easly and communicate through Internet. There are so many disadvantages i will discuss in another paragraph .
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you bought tv a week ago but when you got home you discovered that

The reason I am writing to you is poor quality of your commodity, Unfortunately the TV which I bought from your company is does not working well , when i connected the tv to wifi it started to work badly after that I tried connected with your company However the dispatcher in the beginning ignored me then I called again and the other dispatcher served me and she said that your company can not help me with that . The ideal solution would be change this TV to other I hope you will help me with it
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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I strongly agree on equal role for both gender. The reason is, being a women they will have more exposure and more advantage in pursuing such career. Women can openly give opinion and knowledge at work. No discrimination can be done as they will be given an equal role.
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nNowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

The graphs illustrate the information about the total proportion in normal meals of three kinds of powers, which eating too much would be unhealthy. From an overall perspective, most of the materials will be added to the dinner.
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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton

The maps informs an industrial area in the town of norbiton and planned the future contructions of the place. there is a significant changed from factories to housing and infrastructures.
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Many historic buildings are being destroyed or replaced. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to preserve these buildings?

In these days most of famous buildings are destroyed this is because people's show his money and build new flats, As, people earn black money and create buildings
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the amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children do you think the best way to deal with the problem sir what others solution can you suggest.

On the other hand, I also think schools are not a place to do sports all time. Therefore, school principals should advise their children's parents to take them either to a club or a specific place where they can do sports. Besides, in these places they will have more attention together with an improve training. For these reasons, children with overweight may reduce it faster than in schools. For example: If i had a child, I would take him to a soccer academy rather than to the school.
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