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IELTS Writing Samples Task 2
IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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An average British child watches television for more than 20 hours in a week and indulge in 7 hours of physical activity. What is the situation in your country and what are the causes of it? What are the solution to overcome the same?

Likewise, in india, many children spend their time on screen, mainly for entertainment but also for education. However, if parents start using parental screen controls, children will devote their time towards outdoor sports.
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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Trying alternative medicine is a positive development because it helps to cure most of disease. This kind of medicine used to be in ancient time. For example, use of Ayurveda medicine start in India 5000 years ago. It has ability to cure disease, not only this but also taking Ayurveda herb can boost immune system, as a result, people live disease free healthy life. To take Chinese medicinal herb take as an example, Chinese people have lived healthy long life because they follow the traditional method religiously. Most of people are practice ancient medicine to cure their disease. Even some medicinal herb has an special power which is able to increased energy naturally, and on top of that is has no side effect.
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\Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

The bar chart illustrates the European young generations expect to change in the next 20 years within 5 different sections including Health, Air quality, Water quality, Food quality and People communication.
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Young people do not care about elderly people they are hiring professionals for caring them. Is it postive or negative development

It Is frequent topic of discussion that possible requisite skills to cater for older relatives. This essay will discuss the specific aspects of this new trend and I will give my opinion about it.
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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting events and festivals. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the prices of tickets for sporting or festivals becoming very expensive. Customers are forced to pay a lot of money to go to those events. I believe it is not a positive process but there is also a very good reason for increasing the prices.
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What is your opinion about the advantages of smoking cigarettes?

Based on my experiences about asking those people who addicted to cigarettes, they said that smoking give them a relaxing feeling, fresh mind and even brighter ideas. In addition, by inhaling a smoke to their lungs, as if they got a new life to live.
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Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Disvuss both views and gove your opinion

As we know in museums, there are lots of works of diffurent people and countries. I think meseum is a place where we find peace of the soul, by looking at the pictures were done by amazing people of each country. But at the same time i think we could also find a place for in museum for the history lovers. Personally, I love watching and seeing and jugding the galleries in myself, without other people speaking. This is why I prefer to leave the art galleries and museums as the way it is. I have visited most of countries museums and art gallery, unfortunately its true, there is no local history and culture. But there were special buildings to show foreign people the local history and culture. Here is just the problem is that is not inside the museum.
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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about whether buy a few expensive clothes or lots of cheaper clothes.I agree with the opinion that buy a few expensive clothes.
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Too much Money is wasted on repairing old buildings do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages .

Is it true that living in the big cities is much more convenient than in villages? I think that live in big city is more convenient but not useful. Today I will write small message to understand this issue in more detail.
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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

To begin with, sometimes couples start making children right after getting married. Although, offspring can make strong bounds in family, it also required to pay them enough attention, teach and care about them properly. This can be difficult due to lack of the life experience so making children might be better in families after 30. For example, young parents that did not get the required wisdom might not be able to deal with the raising a child as this requires a fundamental life knowledge. As a result, younglings do not get the right advice from their parents and have to learn on their mistakes.
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First impressions are often considered to be important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is how you secure a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give relevant examples wherever possible.

Most of the people getting judgement through the first and foremost feeling. But some people consider that successfully facing to interview is most prominent way to acquire the good job. I totally sagree with this statement and will provide further details for my agreement in this essay.
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Some people believe that govts should act to the change the way individuals live in order to ensure they have more healthy lifestyle.Others however think that they should live as they choose.Discuss both and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, countries making progress by leaps and bounds and in some underdeveloped countries, how to make progress is being much-debated topic by some individuals it is the responsibility of the government to provide needs and a vibrant lifestyle to youth but other conflicts that it is all up to them what they choose for living in my certain opinion, it depends on one body what to select or do for life.
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It is better for young people to get the advises from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

In terms of advice, I would say yes it is better to get the advises from old people. I believe old people have experience enough about what we should take even though they never experience the certain thing as what happened to us.
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The neighbor's children accidentally broken The front of window your car

I'm in order to neighbor's. My name is Elmurod. Your children accidentally broken The front of the window my car.
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You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatsfied with your score.

I am candidate in your English course.My name is Suhrob.Last week You took essay from us.After that,You told us"The exam result will outcome on Friday".Today is Friday so that, we took our exam results.At the moment I am glancing at them.And I found some mistakes which you did them during checking my essay.One of them, there are almost three hundred words on my essay but you wrote two hundered fifty words total.
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One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

I am your upstairs neighbor.My name is Suhrob.I am writing you about happened accident by your children.Cause of my letter to you that you went a long business trip.I would chat with you about it by face to face but you are not at home.I was at home yesterday evening after work.Suddenly, I heard my car's alarm after that I looked at the bottom of the flat there were some children were punching near my car then I immediately went down.Let's look at with my eyes, my car's window was broken.There was nobody after broken window.I did not want to call the police for this condititionand I tried to find children who had broken my car's front window.Investigations have shown that the children are your children.I want you fix it within three days.I hope you immadiately eliminate it.
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For centuries, importan parts of education have remained such reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to added to the list. to what extent do you agree?

For ages,in terms of education curriculum subjects such as math,writing and reading plays crucial roles in the sociaty.It is undeniable that computers have become an essential part of our life.Nevertheless,some people believe that computer skills should also become mandatory subject in the advancement.Personally,I am in favor of the notion that computer skills should be added to the list.
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Many country encourage tourism. Does it bring advantages or disadvantages?

The diagram presents information about the process of the milk production by several steps. Overall, the process starts from cows grazing and finishes by appearing milk in the market.
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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way. While others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The graph presents information of the number of passengers during all day in the Paris metro station. Overall, there are two picks and one deep drop of passenger numbers during the day. First is in the morning, second is in the afternoon.
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Some people believe that visitor to other countries should follow local customs and behavior, others disagree and think that the host country welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I can agree with this statement but only at half. I believe that air traveling for short distances in own country could be afforded by people below middle class. Traveling by plane or another air transport variant was always hard for me. I couldn’t forget stress that I used to have as a child than me and my family were flying to another country. I imagine that you can take advantages of all benefits only using business class. Air traveling industry is growing very fast and I think in the near future almost everyone could afford to travel using this way. It is faster and more convenient than all the others but it still has lots of disadvantages. I don’t really like going somewhere using plane but sometimes I just don’t have other options to move.
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