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IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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In some countries young people move in their own homes in early twenties, in other countries they live with parents longer. What do you think, do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?

İn recent years, Many different cultures are getting altered day by day. This might affects directly youth generation. Some suggestions have shown that having both advantages and disadvantages.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I had lunch at roughly 1:30 pm after waking up around 1 pm. I ordered Katsura curry and gyoza at fukutontei ramen. I finished my tasks when I got home, which included sweeping the floor and doing washing. I worked to Pullman on the Park for my shift. I received this shift as my last from this place. I had worked for 9 shift continuously. I had to provide food and drinks for 300 people at the children charity network. Tony, a school friend of mine, and I had to work together. Tony and I headed to a bar after finishing our work. In Australia, I had never previously drank beer. I drank both furphy and IPA beers.
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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for a child having a larger number of toys?

Some people buy numerous number of toys for their boys and girls for playing. While some people, including me, think it is waste of money. I think the drawbacks of it would outweigh any advantages. In this article I will discuss the pros and crons of this issue.
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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

With the industrial revolution is increasing，people have to boost their requirements of oil and gas.There are still many remote and untouched places to be offered.People have no choice but to face the problems about double-edged sword.I absolutely think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.It is not clever and they just look ahead too much.
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In many countries household waste e.g food packaging is increasing day by day.What are the reasons ? How can this problem be solved

The difficulty regarding imposing higher taxes on convenience food is that it will have a harmful effect on the homeless and impoverished families for whom, fast food chains might actually be the only place to eat warm although unhealthy fast food. With an increase in cost of living, malnutrition is still a common problem. Thus, if the prices of even the cheapest products from the menu rapidly increase, then the homeless will be able to afford less food than normally they purchase.
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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice

there are several discoveries in the last century in my country which helps to improve the living standards of people's lives and make them more easier. Discoveries such as the telephone and the advancement in the medical field that have proven to be the most important for shaping and changing the life of the community. However, I believe that the most benefical discovery is the easy access to the internet facility for the common man.
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There should be laws to control the amount and the type of violence shown on television programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people argue that the amount and type of violence displayed on television programs should be ruled by the law, but I believe that people have a right to watch what they want.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and measures are required.

There are 4 pie charts, that represents demographic changes that may happen in Italy and Yemen within 50 years.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and measures are required.

The four pie charts illustrate the proportions of 3 groups of ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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In many countries, people throw away a lot of food from restaurants and shops. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

Nowadays, there is a big issue with wasting food. The food older than its expiry date is not allowed to be sold anymore, which leads to a lot of food that is thrown away. It is agreed that this is a waste of food. Analysing the quality of the food and the l
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some people believe that the extinction of animals is a natural process and human should not intervene. Do you agree or disagree?

This graphic shows changes in the consumption of 3 food types between 1975 and 2000. Products are fruits, sugar and ice cream.
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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what are the effects?

the bar chart illustrates the outcome the survey on the limited age of people in different of European countries and shows which is the effective solution that has an impact on climate change .
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Countries such as China, India, and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact, many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem

The problem of increasing number of population and limited natural resources in some countries was always debatable and now has become more controversial. Some specialist believe that available mineral deposit are less according to the populance and this will be the major issue for the survival of the human beings. In m opinion there are various causes behind the notion and in upcoming paragraphs i will discuss the possible reasons and their solution and thus leading to a logical conclusion.
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Nowadays, governments are trying to encourage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel. What are the advantages of forms of public transport like these?

nowadays, society is growing day by day, that development brings a lot of gain but also leaves many pain. For example, places where there is good economic development, often there are many people living there. That's definitely a good thing, because the more people living there, the more human resources there will be, but with it comes traffic congestion. because the large the number of people, the greater the number of vehicles. that's why goverments are trying to encounrage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel, because this help reduce traffic congestion and save more time. Cost to use buses and subways also much cheapter compare to cars or motocrycles. Not only cheap and save time but also bring safety for persons. Therefore, busses and subways is the right choice that the goverments have set
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The pie chart illustrates the important causes that lead the agricultural land to become less productive, and the table gives information about three areas that got affected by these causes in the 1990s period.
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Some people believes that children`s time outside of school should be fill with schedule activities such as art and music classes and sports others feels that childern needs free time to play and relax discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

childrens should need free time to play and relax before engaging in applyart,music and
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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, English, French, Japanese, Chinese, etc have been really popular. They are commonly used at everywhere in the world, especially English. That makes children have to know a foreign language if they want to become a global citizen. According to this, I don’t agree that school should not force children to learn a foreign language.
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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open space in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A widely discussed problem in our country is building houses or planting trees on vacant place. The following paragraphs discussed whether agree or disagree and reach a reasonable conclusion.
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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

Married couple deciding not to have children's trend is increasing. although world is already over populated couples decision is accepatable for sometimes, couples feeling lonely to here old age to made this decision. in my opinion merits of this notion outnumbered its demerits.
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Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

One of the serious violation in academic fields is plagiariasm. Stealing a person's idea is a crime which violates the copyright laws.  In addition, It is a kind of cheating,on the other hand,it is not morrally right. Furthermore, Plagiariasm will hurt the relations between the professors and  the students. Consequently, there are many platforms used by professors to check plagiariasm.So, it is essential for students to write using their own words, opinions, etc. Hence,making an hounest attemps is confirmed in every level of education. Although plagiariasm is forbidden by law, there are some reasons  such as poor-time management skill, lack of sources and importance of high grades for students to plagiarized.
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