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many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

In the past, animal park is a good alternative place for children to see the nearly extinction or abroad spicies and let's organization gain a lot of profit, however ,at the present, a little bit of benefit is unequal comparing with animals's right that taken by man kind.
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It is cruel to keep animals in zoos. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is animals are living creatures that need their own space, most of teen have an specific place to can survive For example the lion needs to live in the savanna beacuse of some many characteristics of the place like the temperature, the food ,if you can say it like this, the lion needs to know how to survive by itself and for this he needs, the lion needs to know how to survive by itself and for this he needs to know about hunting,also know its habitat for learn where to get food and water or where can be dangerous or far from home.-And it's the same case in some others so my conclusion is that keep animals in a zoo it's cruel.
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n some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

This pie and bar chart provide the percentage of women in poverty and rates of teh poverty by gender and age in USA in 2008. Overall, it can be seen that single women with no dependent children was the majority of the women in poverty, while married women with no denpendent children was the minority of poverty.
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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compare to the past due to advanced technologies which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

On comparing to the past time these days advanced technology has played a massive role in lowering the crime rate.There is a thought that says technical sources have helped a lot to control and eliminate crime.This essay will argue how technology has an absolute-counter effect on criminal activities.
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Some people have the same type of job throughout their life while others prefer to change the type of job. What’s your opinion

I graduated with a bachelor's degree in Teaching English as a foreign language from Azad university. I am currently studying for a master's degree in TEFL.
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goverenment should spend more money on education that on recration and sports. do you agree or disagree

The following table presents the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffees and bananas in five different European countries over two different years that are five years apart (1999 & 2004).
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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or dissagree?

Education is very crucial in this competitive era while it is believed by some individuals that from schools to universities, people consider theory more than practical skills. I partially agree with this phenomenon and the most specific reasons will be elaborated on in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I would think virtual classes are taking over the academy by storm, it is doing it by having a lot of perks with this online classes, on the other hand, tradiational education are the root of all sources that we are having in Information age, which can't be replaced by any means. we will discuss the both assessment with in the below essay.
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the plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. summorise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the given pardigam illustrate the current plan of university sport centre. Meanwhile dramatical upgradation in sport facility in advance.
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There should be a complete ban for advertising. So that we can benefit from its negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advertisement is a part of communication which we can access the product that we are interested in. Some of the might think that a ban of advertising can be helpful. In contrast, there are many reason why we should not ban the adverstisement. From my perspectives, I disagree about this and I will explain this topic as below.
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People watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should government fund local film industries?

True foreign films are watched much more than local produced film. I think the reason this is local films are don't interesting a lot of people, therefore they prefer foreign films. Firstly, local films are very a low-budget films and they have poor quality. In addition, in my country local films are prefer only by older people because they are interested and for them, this is a valid perspective. In my view, foreign films are more interesting young people, and the reason this is that many young people watched foreign films because they want to know more the language and for them it is understandable, than local films.
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Children today spend a lot of time on social media. What potential problems could it cause and how would they be addressed.

Social media plays an important role in today's world. People of all ages spend a considerable amount of time using social media sites. Social media is used as a source of news, entertainment and gossip. Therefore many people use social media regularly and the use of social media is increasing especially among children. Some argue that using social media is beneficial for children while others claim that it harms children. I personally believe that social media is harmful to children because it might lead to health problems and it contains inappropriate content.
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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Nowadays, many people are staying in either traditional residences or modern apartment residences. The way people choose their residence may be from many factors. I will illustrate both reasons why choose a specific type of residence.
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Nowadays, distance-learning have gained in popularity, but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person.To what extent do you agree or disagree

With the advent of rapid internet and convenient software, distance education have become increasingly popular in many countries. Although, some are of the view that online education cannot surpass the traditional teaching method which requires students to attend college on campus. However, I partly disagree to this statement because online studies can offer mutilple benefits, while having a few downsides.
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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in thier contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

In contemporary society, There are many vital problems that humans must face to, especially global warming, this essay will discuss the detail that why global warming become a serious problem and the suggestion from my opinion.
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Some TV programmes, videos of violent games and other leisure activities are harmful to children. How harmful they are? What can be done to solve these problems?

I am writing to inform you that I cannot start my new job as a software engineer at the next week because of some circumstances.
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Write about the following topic. People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Getting a job is as important as breathing in the air. It is being said that individuals should choose the subjects by thinking about the career related to that, not as per their own choices. I do not agree with this statement, however, I believe a person should follow his inner soul. I shall discuss my points in the following paragraphs.
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In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. what problems do you think youth unemployement causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

It is true that the unemployment rate has risen in recent decades and this is the most controversial issue that people like debating about. In recent years, a lot more young people have had trouble finding their jobs and it leads them to chronic depression or make them give up their life. It could cause social problem
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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as woman at parenting. Do you agree?

In most of the society nowadays, people may consider female to be a better baby-sitter than male. However, I do not agree with th opinion at all. Taking care of children is not an indigenous ability to anyone, it is all about learning. Since no one knows how to be a good parent until they finally become, there is no evidence to figure out who is better on raising kids.
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