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Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society.what do you think are the main causes of unemployment and solutions

The increasing of the unemployment rate is becoming one of more serious social issues. A massive workers' movement from rural to urban areas might be the main cause of that problem, along with technological development. Government measures that aim to minimize centralization jobs in cities, and the promotion of handmade tasks could solve or mitigate unemployment.
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(opinion one) A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, (opposing opinion) while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people do not feel that they are personally responsible to others and environment.
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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

Now days, larger part of crowd is starting focussing on eating healthy and excercising regularly. While, there are few who still requires to adopt these habits by making them aware about detrimental impacts, a unhealthy food could have in their lives. In this essay, I will elucidate the reasons behind of acceptance healthy diet and staying fit as well as measures which can help lazy crowd to follow.
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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

According to some scientists everyone one will be speaking the same language in the near future. In my opinion, this prediction will come true, it will have positive and negative ramifications.
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you r attending a part time course in college. Due to some problem, you can't continue your course.

I study electrical automation course in second semister at loyalist college.I am writing this letter to inform you that due to family emergency I can not pursue my remaining course.
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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present time, In fast growing countries, transportation is essentials part of the individual’s daily
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Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment. How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?

According to my views is increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. First, People learn on watch. So watch a film with cruel and violence is bad for human psycholist. This kind of film may be pursued people to bad humor. So it should be restrict schedully. Second, Many people watch TV a lot. on recent survey, Mongolia people watch tv 2 hours a day. That is why it might be hight possibility of influence to increase levels of violence in society. It seems to me especially children don't watch violence or harmful film on tv. So tv staffs are should restrict by age. Overall, I think increasing level of violence on television and in filis is having a direct result on levels of violence in society.
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some people for the same organisation all their working life. others think that its better to work for different organisation. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Most people do not know if they will stay in the same organisation or they will shift to another job,so people always think about the present and foget about the future of thier life.
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There are more workers who work from home and more students who study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this materialistic driven world, technology is advancing more and more.As it penetrates every aspect of people's lives. It has been seen that, automation has become a topic of debate these days. Many people argued that, the people who works at home that is possible for the development of computers. This essay is an attempt to believe that, it is not a positive development and the reasons would be substantiated in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

People would argue that painting and drawings are crucial for student's development and they should be added the school system as a complusory subject. I completely argee with the point of view and in the essay i will support my opinion
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Nowadays, people spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

People now use to spend more time in their offices and due to this they are not able to spend enough time at home. In this essay we will discuss positives of this, which can be promotion chances and more learning, and negatives of this such as not enough time to family and becoming less social.
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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medias play an important role in the society, its main responsibilty is communicate the news and events to the common public. In the current period the number of medias has increased that includes print, telecast, radios, and social medias. It's noticed that the focus of these medias are diverted only towords the issues and problems, and are paying less attention to the positive development of the society and some people thinks its harmful to the people and society.
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Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reason . It is good or bad?

The World is going through a difficult stage due to pandemic that caused lockdown throughout the world. Many lives have paid for the same. Down the year everyone was in a hurry to gather money and basic Necessity of life. To spend time at home rather than going outside is helpful in achieving safety
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We live in a world of technology these days . While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problem in terms control and security of information outweighs the advantages.

Now everything connected by internet. Internet plays more important role in our life nowadays. We can watch movies, listen to music, find information which we research and also we can buy everything that we want. Also people can talk each other by it easily and they can put theirs photos or informations to social networks. So from this point we can call internet already has become half of our life. Although problem in terms control and security of information outweighs the advantages. It can be the biggest problem but i think we need to internet more. We can not shutoff the internet while our demand become more and more to the internet. Followed by i think internet needs to the society
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Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others prefer group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The conventional education approach of teaching one on forty students is regarded as old-fashioned. The educational experts developed two new teaching modes, individual private lessons and small group lessons. However, not everyone suitable for one singular learning approach.
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the growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved. some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical addtion lession in n the school curriculum .to what extent do you agree or diagree?

IN the recent year,there are surge in number of owerweight people.although may people belive that overweight people goes to the health care clinic to advice how to reduce the weight it is good. but i think in revese manner and agrre to this statsment.my inclination giving ensuing paragraph.
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Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my opinion, having a music class plays very important role in student's life, while growing up and learning new things practising music gives them concentarion, some times it leads to a career path too. Music breaks the connection of individual to the material so that they are able to concentarate.
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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As we know internet has become a daily nessesity in our life, it's has changed a lot in our socialize. There are been many positive and negative which i am going to explain some of them in bellow.
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The below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below?

The chart gives information about some consumer product in four european countries. There are six goods on the chart
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Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Two opinion about museum operations
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