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In many countries, many students tend to have behavior problems at school or at home. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

This tree diagram illustrates the different branches of the English language.
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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

Person character is set as a result of the people genes and their traits can not be changed. However, to some extent I agree with this statement. Following that, the human intelligence is wholly consist from the ancestor actions.
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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

It is obvious that for sound health diet is more important. Although,The majority of the people trying to follow proper diet chat but its getting hard day by day.this essay intends to analyse the reason of this phenomenon and suggest some soluations to alleviate the situation.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It is obvious that few nations allows to do work in the middle of finishing high school and commencing higer education.the main benefits of working in between two entity to achieve experience and this experience keep them ahead to get admit in the top universites. Moreover,the major brawbacks is that it can affect their grades in college.
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some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Instituitions play vital role to protect students who are attending in school every day. Althrough authroity ensure security, for overall security they build boundury around the school for more protection.However few individuals believe this boarding in school are suitable for children. i firmly agree with this in the same time i also believe others opinions equally important.this esseay intends to analyse both prespectives.
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Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that humans being are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The rising temperature of the earth is swaling day by day due to increasing global warming .For this ,reason different kinds of species getting extinct. some individuals intend to believe that countries and people should take initiative to fix this issue,whereas others argue to involve humans being .this essay to intends analyse both perspectives.
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Many companies are strongly against having personal relationships in the workplace and impose strict policies against it. Do you agree or disagree with this practice? Include any relevant explanations and examples from your own experience.

The importance of having no relationships at work which was debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate on both the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
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A hot debate over selecting between owning or renting accommodations, however having self-owned house trumps the latter one. Some consider being a house owner represents wealth status in a higher class. Meanwhile, young adults devote a lifetime to paying off a mortgage rather than being tenants who encounter repetitive moving in and out. Nonetheless, being an owner of a living property brings more benefits than shortcomings from my perspective.

A hot debate over selecting between owning or renting accommodations, however having self-owned house trumps the latter one. Some consider being a house owner represents wealth status in a higher class. Meanwhile, young adults devote a lifetime to paying off a mortgage rather than being tenants who encounter repetitive moving in and out. Nonetheless, being an owner of a living property brings more benefits than shortcomings from my perspective.
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In many countries, people do not recycle waste material, such as paper, glass and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays in the highly polluted world of today rubbish recycling is a vital issue.In this , essay I intend to indicate the reasons for this issue and the way we can solve it.
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n my place, a new home are needed, but only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build a new home there. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, cities in developed countries are fully covered in skyscrapers and other type of buildings. Occasionally, in some extent, that even not enough space for other structures. However, personally, I think that its good idea to allow build new infrastructure in the countryside.
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Some people believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Has made a water temperature controller in the red lobster tank. The purpose of this study was to study and design a red lobster raising tank to be suitable for the raising conditions. From the experimental results, it was found that the efficiency of the water temperature controller The temperature control is relatively stable, but the temperature may increase or decrease somewhat depending on the weather conditions and the experimental environment, including the duration of the experiment. In conclusion, the air temperature is directly proportional to the water temperature.
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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

i agree with both the statements, since the experience and learning completly depends on time and atmosphere around the child during their childhood.But completly depends on case to case and parenthood.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

The graph above illustrates how many people at the age of 65 and over had influenza in particular village in the United Kingdom from years 1985 to 1995. Units are measured in number of people.
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Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The average household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie chart illustrates comparison of average household expenditure between Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The main sectors for consideration consists of 5 categories including housing, transport, food, health care, other goods and services.
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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Do you ever feel unsafe yourself when stay at home by your oune our walking? if you said yes you are one of 86 present people who often nervous about their self safety.
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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In today's world, publicy require more money for family for normal live. Due to big differance between successfully and just developed countreas, family income amount differance can be a huge. So family from second type of country have to work more and sometimes both parent need to work. And this family no choice.
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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Individuals who can afford paying extra to a community funded healthcare system, should get a faster and better medical attention than others. I do not accord with this statement for various reasons and this essay will explain.
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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally . Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

controversy regarding the environmental problem is still ongoing on the industry. It is often argued that the environmental issue should be resolve on a global scale, whilst others disagree and think dealing within the nation is far better. This essay is going to examine the both side of the debate before reaching the conclusion.
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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

only people who smoke suffer from many deadly diseases, but the people surround also get impacted from that smoke. This is the reason that many people say that smoking should be banned on public places. I am in compete accord with this statement and believe that if government is not able to persuade people to leave smoking habit then at least they should be prohibited on public places.
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Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The contribution of sports is not hidden from human society . Some individuals claimed , there is a good chance to show the reputation of the country to other countries by hosting overseas sporting events . However , others argue that it is very dangerous to the financial and economical condition of that nation . I partially agree with this statement that it has both , benefits and disbenefits , for the hosting country
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